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Reviews for We Solved Nothing!

By : xxdedxx
  • From SerenaKitty on October 10, 2007
    Please tell me this is a chapter fic, because the story has drawn me in and now I want to know more. This fic is great I really ejoyed reading it. The only critiscism I have is that there wasn't really a vebal confession from either boy about thier feelings, but maybe I'm just a verbal person, who knows?
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  • From AliceInuzukaAburame on September 08, 2007
    awwwww......T_T...that was cuuute.......and sad...and well hott....and ummm....ha ha very good XD....and very in character.....you did a good job!!! i loved it ^__^
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  • From Picspixie on July 24, 2007
    wow that was very well written, i hope you add to this, seems like it would make a great chapter story
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  • From Mazzer on June 24, 2007
    I thought it was great! Totally in character which I loved and generally greatky wrote! Thanks for posting!
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  • From kagome1303 on June 15, 2007
    Certainly interesting, great scene, and true title. They really didn't solve anything. By the end, Naruto still seemed very confused. As for Sasuke, not even I am fully grasping why he did that. Oh well. At least I got a nice shiver sensation while reading, which means I really liked it.
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  • From ANON - very happy bunny rabit on August 06, 2006
    i have no idea whats going on, continue so i shall know...
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  • From chinohana on June 12, 2006
    They really did solve nothing. n_n really cute!! CX
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  • From ANON - Youkai Dreams on October 04, 2005
    Hello there!
    Well, I obviously read your story, and decided I'd review! Why don't we get the bad news out of the way first, okay?

    >.< Alrighty, let's start with the spelling mistakes. Let's say your whole story is a body of water, and I'm a boat. Each spelling mistake is a new whole in this boat. I start sailng the words, calmly at first, but all of a sudden, there's a whole blown into my ship! OH NO, DUDE! Well, it's not that big of a deal, but THERE'S ANOTHER ONE! AHHH! By the third paragraph, everyone's dead. @_@

    Note: I noticed you're having a problem with "your" and "you're" Use "your" when you're talking about something that belongs to a specific someone. Use "you're" when you're combining "you" and "are"... no acceptions anywhere.

    Let's go back to the boat. We're on a tight schedule here. We have to get Sasuke and Naruto to a ...party. Yeah, that's it...a party! Well, each paragraph, from start to finish is a desitination point. Problem is, we can't get there in time! We have to go soo far..there's way to much water! In other words, seperate your paragraphs xD. Another way to think about it: Since this writing, you may associate it with things you learned in language arts, which is good. However, you need to... bend a few rules. We all know those suck-ass teachers whom love when you tearn in those 20page long paragrpahs, right? What about you? Would you like to read a story that has like, 2000 words, and about 3 paragraphs? @_@. Story paragraphing differs from BCR and ECR paragraphing.

    Another thing: grammar, which is basically...important. WOULD I JUST STOP WITH THE BOAT THING?! Ahh...no. So, we've made it to all the parties -partially late-, but we've got to get the bg boy's back home to...play. Each grammar mistake is a pirate ship cannon thing firing at you. (Yes, I kow I' pitiful). Well, by the time we're gotten to the 4th paragraph, the boys are long dead. By the time we're at the 5th, our ships life has ended also. (Okay, so since it's a ship, it's 'life' never actually began. Let's steal one from Family Guy...there's endless possibilities there).

    I think that's it for the mistakes.

    For the 'good' things: yur story line was okay, although mistakes to steal from the quality. Me, being a English freak...this stuff really bugs me. The lemon waso'k (yeah, I meant to type that @_@). Just revise, and ery'thangle be aiight (Uh-oh! Gansta Barney in da hiz-ouse!)
    -Youkai Dreams

    ~*~WARNING: Youkai Dreams is in NO way responsible for injuries or attempted suicide cases reflected by this review. You were in every way responsible for reading this, and probably figured out she was on drugs from reading the first paragraph. WHY you continued reading this is completly beyond me. Are you arguing with me...are you calling me a liar?? Well, mrs. "I'm so smart," if you hadn't read this far, how do you excplain that you're this far down? ...Oh -sweatdrop- really? S-sorry mom. It won't happen again. Yes ma'am. Understood. He..hehe, I'll see you at dinner?~*~

    ANYWAY! Yipes! Bye.
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  • From ANON - Sukara on June 29, 2005
    Tis really good xD. but i'm confused about the last part where Sasuke is and Naruto already left. I dunno...Some part around there when Sasuke thought that NAruto didn't the right to show him a sad face and all that stuff. I just don't get it. :gonk:
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  • From ANON - Aishiteru Koinu on June 29, 2005
    O.O!! That was awesome! I haven't read something as good as that in a frickin' month! If there's gonna be another chapter to this one, then I'll deffientally be checking in to see! Yokudekimashita (good job)!
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  • From AkumaKawa on June 28, 2005
    It's good, but Sasuke doesn't know about the Kyuubi so he can't really call him that, maybe fox boy or just Naruto.

    You got a lot of sentences that are run on sentences all they need is , and ; and it will be fixed.

    Keep up the good work, I look forward to the sequel or the continuing of the story; Coolsa.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on June 28, 2005
    not bad, nope, not bad at all. Your sex scenes arent too shabby either. *wink* wink* Loved it, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on June 15, 2005
    Very kawaii -- I really liked it a lot!!! ^^ Nicely done, and quite a clever idea -- keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - silverfox on June 06, 2005
    interesting yet very enjoyable loved it
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