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Reviews for Akuma no Trill

By : UchihaSaki
  • From ANON - shay on June 23, 2005
    i like this story so far, but you have to continue with it. It's a cliff hanger...and those hurt!! Dont know why, but they do....
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  • From ANON - brenan on June 07, 2005
    the plot of your story is good......
    i only wish that the story won't be a mess up one
    im glad that you make naruto a violinist he seems perfect for the role...
    oh by the way why is there a pi and a dog in it can you explain it?????
    im really confuse in the role of the two animal..... ty
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  • From ANON - silverfox on June 02, 2005
    i am loveing this fic its great, i've also seen yami no matsuei i own it keep up the good work can't to see what happens next update soon
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  • From ANON - vampchic on June 02, 2005
    pretty good so far. cant wait to find out how everyone will enteract with each other.
    so Naruto can summon spirts? I'm guessing he can summon his demon?
    hope that you update soon, want to read more.
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  • From ANON - Jadejj on May 31, 2005
    neat start what's next for our little blond ?
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  • From ANON - silverfox on May 31, 2005
    that was a great first chapter
    can't wait for the next chapter
    just make sure to watch out for spelling errors k
    so update soon
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  • From ANON - vampchic on May 31, 2005
    Hmm. well you have tons of run-ons, and some of your paragraphs could be split into two. Perhapes you should think about getting a beta. Other then that, I liked it. I would like to know how Sasuke works into Naruto's life since I have never seen Yami no Matsuie. And I would also like to know why everyone is picking on the poor boy. Anyway, update soon. Want to read more.
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