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Reviews for The Tape: Chasing Naruto Present Fic

By : megladon129
  • From DevilnBlue on April 04, 2015
    This fic had me dying laughing from beginning to end. I'm surprised Sasuke didn't try to swipe some of Naruto's underwear the way he contemplated sniffing his pillow on his recon mission. It felt so real the fear Sasuke felt about being rejected that he was willing to break into Naruto's home and keep his feelings bottled up forever rather than put himself on the line. I love how both Sasuke and naruto are in character even when Sasuke is in a tight spot he does some very random but Sasuke like things like decide if he knocks out naruto then he can then erase the message and of course naruto hears it. He has to for them to get to that point but when naruto stopped Jim at the door for live ten seconds I feared the worse. I was like Sasuke turn yourself into a log in escape... But then he wouldn't have had the chance to get the life fucked out of him. And wow did he. I love how complicated these guys are because they can still trade insults while still trying to get into each others pants. Best moment was Saauke's all out brawl and I like how you don't dumb down Naruto. And you use kyuubi sense of smell to alert the blonde to danger. Oh my fucking god and Sasuke babbling how much he lives naruto on the answering machine and during sex was priceless.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 04, 2007
    Gosh, that was really awesome. And hilarious. XD You're a really good writer, I noticed. One of the best fanfiction writers (in my book). I hope you continue (with this pairing!) to write more stuff like this.
    Great humor, love it. Keep it up! XD XD XD
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  • From WalkingAway on August 06, 2007
    “I hope you didn’t have any more plans for the day, Sasuke...or tomorrow, for that matter.”
    Despite himself, Sasuke tangled his fingers in the blonde’s hair and leaned up to plant a long kiss on the man’s lips. “Why tomorrow?”
    “Because I’m going to make sure that you can’t walk.”

    =D yum! i finished chasing naruto last night (at 3am - i really shouldn't start reading fanfiction at midnight when i have work in the morning) BUT IT WAS WORTH IT! and this one was bloomin great!

    a LOT of people have trouble writing naruto's character really well, but you can! congrats
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  • From on June 01, 2007
    HAH! That was really funny/hot. I epically loved the end.

    *sigh* i am officially addicted to naruto, TEH ULTIMATE SEME! Nad what better seme makes sure his uke won't walk? its naruto, nruto-never know what hes gonna do next. Naruto Naaaruto. Gigity gigity lets have.... ahem. sorry. i just watched family guy U_U/

    Be sure to write more NaruSasu! ^^

    Ja ne!
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  • From Shancai on January 21, 2007
    Oh I loved this !!! Speacially the part where Sasuke confeses his love for Naruto in the dentist xD It's a cute way to say he loves him, I liked that a lot!
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  • From ANON - urban mystic on November 21, 2006
    aaaw kawaii-ness (not to mention smexy-ness). and I am so happy I found your fics

    *Mystic*
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  • From Oranis on October 31, 2006
    Hola,

    I was just rereading the fics of my past, and I realized a few things about this fic that made me very happy, and one thing that kind of made me scratch my head. First off, I must thank you so very much for spelling viciously correctly. If I read about one more viscous grin, I will scream. The thought of melting faces in the middle of what would otherwise be a very intense scene gets real old real fast.

    Anyways, I notice that I have not left a review for this story. FOR SHAME! Point is, I loved it as per usual. The only thing that really gave me pause was that Naruto never said how he felt about Sasuke. I realize that it is heavily implied that he loves him, but it could just as easily be read that Naruto was so happy at finally having someone say that they love him that he just screwed their brains out. While I am pretty sure that that is not the intended reading, it still is a little... unsettling. Not sure if that's the right word. Oh well, you get the idea I think.

    I also realize that this is a one shot, but I would really love to see another installment. I mean, there are so many things you could do with this seed.

    Anywho. I really loved it and I hope to read more of your stuff in the future.

    All the best,

    --Oranis--

    P.S. I feel a sense of De Ja Vu while I write this... have I written it before or am I just losing my mind...?

    Also, I notice that you have not written much lately... is there a reason for that? I mean to say, are you retiring from fiction, or is this just a break? Just curious.
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  • From ANON - kaesaku on September 09, 2006
    bwahaha~
    ..loves this line about the bulls! -> "And not one wanted to go where I told it to without trying to stick a horn up my ass."
    ..loves ur fic!
    ^^

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  • From ANON - RavenSilverKat on August 21, 2006
    I love it! It's so kawaii! I guess you like a seme Naruto and a uke Sasuke, ne? ^.~
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  • From ANON - kuu-ish on August 08, 2006
    YOSH! OH THE JOY OF SHINING YOUTH! -

    Aha. That was indeed a very nice one-shot. Much better then that one episode of hey arnold. Ahaha. ^_^ And WEE you made Sasuke uke. That maks me supremely happy. :)
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  • From ANON - Konoko89 on August 08, 2006
    That was really good. You're amazing. Once I started, I just couldn't stop until i'd read the whole thing. I loved it so much! Great job! >.
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  • From ANON - lain on January 23, 2006
    Ok I love you. You now own part of my soul, yahoo! I'm in the middle of reading Chasing Naruto, and paused to read this. Awesome job! XD I'm loving Chasing Naruto so far!!!
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  • From ANON - Molly on January 19, 2006
    i'd read this some times ago ... heheh .. just now happens to review ..

    this is a good one ... another fic of Naruto being a seme ... (tired of naruto being a uke) ...
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  • From ANON - Kerrisa on January 10, 2006
    You are a dream come true! It is about Damn time someone else wrote a fic where Naruto topped Sasuke! Lol i loved this little present, i'm an avid reader of Chasing Naruto ( not sure if i reveiwed it yet tho..) But i greatly enjoy and appreciate your work! I swear i sat for hours on end reading every chapter, it seemed after i started i just couldn't stop reading it! Alas i'm addicted! Lol I was forced to leave the house so i had printed up the last threee chapters to go, by the time we left i had one left unread >_< I dont know why i didn't think b4 to check for other fics you might have had posted, but eventually it dawned on me to do so and that is how i was led here! so all in all i'm a happy camper and an avid fan! Thank you so much for sharing your work with the aff.net world! *Hugglez* lol I'mma be checkin for updatesand imma lookin forward to them!

    Always,
    Kerrisa
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  • From ANON - Chris Jackson on January 07, 2006
    Awesome, I love how you write, its soooo ummm whats the word for it fluid to me. I read it with much enjoyment and ease. Anyway thanks for the great writing and I have one requests or a challenge if you will. I would like it greatly if you could write a Shinka X Kiba that would be awesome or heheheeheheheh Puppet kid and Kiba. Kida is like my boy friend ^_^ Its scary sometimes hahahah

    Thanks
    Chris


    OOOOhhhhhhh how could I forget Shino X Kiba
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