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Reviews for Hitting on Sasuke

By : YuriKuro
  • From ANON - Heather on May 14, 2005
    ok, so there were some grammatical errors, but i usually disregard that when i'm reading a story. and since english is not your first language, it's no big deal. now, about the story. i think sasuke is a little OC, but it's interesting to see him lose his cool like that. naruto's also a little out of character in the way he taunts sasuke. it's kind of hard to picture naruto being the one to tease sasuke like that and for sasuke to freak out about it. to me, it seems more natural to be the other way around, with sasuke teasing the pissed off naruto. but...i do think you should continue your story. i don't want to seem like i'm dissing your story, because i really enjoyed reading it. although i do think they're both a little out of character, i would like to see how far naruto is willing to go to get a rise out of sasuke. things could get very...ahem...interesting, ya know? so i'd just like to let you know that if you're willing to continue, i'm willing to read. toodles!
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  • From Lithiel on May 14, 2005
    u are EBIL! >_>
    u seem to like teasing as much as your Naruto does :(
    keep on writing or u might have to face a ff-maniac with a gun to force u to keep on ;P *lol*
    very good job, and I really really hope u'll take this fic further :))
    baba Lithi ^^/)

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  • From ANON - chem chick on May 14, 2005
    That was awesome, and you'd better write more as fast as you can! I loved it! PLEASE!!! It's too good to not write more!
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  • From ANON - allyluv17 on May 14, 2005
    muwahahahahah!!! usually i'm not into the yaori stuff, but it's done wonderfully, so i'd say continue please!!!
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  • From ANON - lo on May 14, 2005
    Interesting...that was kind of hot and has the potential to be pretty cool. Let us see what you can do with it.
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 13, 2005
    No!!! Not again!!! *kicks computer* Bad!!! Stop that!!! ^^ Sorry, about that, once again......... *bangs head on wall*
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 13, 2005
    Ici on parle francais!!! ^___^ Ah, j'espere....... (attempts to figure out how to add in the accents but gives up when her new lap-top starts giving her problems) ^^ Hi! First off, let me mention that I reeeeally liked this -- very clever and well done, not to mention funny and cute, too!!! There were a few grammar mistakes that were due to your aforementioned "problem", but over-all it was fine -- and the mistakes were easy to correct mentally as I read through it, so it's all good! d(^-^)b (
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 13, 2005
    Ahh!!! *flips out* I am sooooo sorry about the "triple review" thing -- I actually wrote about 3 times as much as that, but for some reason it isn't showing up....... *pouts* That, and my computer enjoys tormenting me. XP I'll try e-mailing it to you -- maybe that will work........
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 13, 2005
    Ici on parle francais!!! ^___^ Ah, j'espere....... (attempts to figure out how to add in the accents but gives up when her new lap-top starts giving her problems) ^^ Hi! First off, let me mention that I reeeeally liked this -- very clever and well done, not to mention funny and cute, too!!! There were a few grammar mistakes that were due to your aforementioned "problem", but over-all it was fine -- and the mistakes were easy to correct mentally as I read through it, so it's all good! d(^-^)b (
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 13, 2005
    Ici on parle francais!!! ^___^ Ah, j'espere....... (attempts to figure out how to add in the accents but gives up when her new lap-top starts giving her problems) ^^ Hi! First off, let me mention that I reeeeally liked this -- very clever and well done, not to mention funny and cute, too!!! There were a few grammar mistakes that were due to your aforementioned "problem", but over-all it was fine -- and the mistakes were easy to correct mentally as I read through it, so it's all good! d(^-^)b (
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 13, 2005
    Ici on parle francais!!! ^___^ Ah, j'espere....... (attempts to figure out how to add in the accents but gives up when her new lap-top starts giving her problems) ^^ Hi! First off, let me mention that I reeeeally liked this -- very clever and well done, not to mention funny and cute, too!!! There were a few grammar mistakes that were due to your aforementioned "problem", but over-all it was fine -- and the mistakes were easy to correct mentally as I read through it, so it's all good! d(^-^)b (
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  • From RuShin on May 13, 2005
    Hmmm...personly, I thought it was kawaii. ^-^ And now, I want that drink. O_O
    Sasuke was a bit OOC though. (Bah, he is in my stories too. >_> ) So I'd suggest working on his character a bit. ^^
    But all-in-all, I thought it was reeaally cute. ^^

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  • From ANON - macy on May 13, 2005
    hrm, it was cute! ^^ i'd read a second chapter if you ever make one. Although, i don't get why the two boys would be sharing the same boba drink in the first place if they're just friends.
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  • From ANON - lje on May 13, 2005
    please continue...it's really cute
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