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Reviews for Scissors, Paper, Stone

By : LilMonk
  • From ANON - dumdeedum on February 17, 2011
    I finally found this story again. Beautiful. Tragic. Wonderfully told. One of the best Itachi-Hinata stories I've read.
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  • From ANON - Ruby Moon on April 10, 2008
    I've read all of the chapters, but I didn't get to review until now. First off, I want to say that you have written a great Itachi/Hinata fic that is actually (and definitely!) credible. The Itachi/Hinata fics I've read are totally OOC and some AU with totally no character development. Yours is right on target, with all characters IC. Second, the sex wasn't at all shallow, unlike in many lemony fics. It was artfully written and described with such detail I fell in love, honestly! Third, I am so glad to have found this fic, because there aren't many good Itachi/Hinata fics to go around, and you saved me! ::glomps:: You're wonderful!!

    Will you write any more Itachi/Hinata fics? I'd read them!!
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  • From pats on October 14, 2007
    very nice and well written.....i mean the plot & stuff....poor hinata & itachi....tragic love story indeed.....and rinji, who only seen his real father once....tats really sad.....

    anyways, i enjoyed reading it & great job at it as well....
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  • From ANON - Grandma18 on September 25, 2006
    I loved this story even though it is depressing.
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  • From ANON - Grandma18 on September 25, 2006
    That was a pretty good story. Depressing ending, but in a sense that was the only way Hinata and Itachi could truly be together in traquality. I pity Rinji and Sasuke. Mostly Rinji because he lost his mother and bilogical father and Sasuke even though he wasn't truly in love with her he stilled cared for her. I'm looking forward into reading more of your work. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Deja on October 23, 2005


    I just want you to know that I cried at the end.
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  • From ANON - mI.ShOE on October 19, 2005
    I love your story! Really beautiful... *tears*

    If you could, could you post this at ff.net? Perhaps remove some explicit scenes so that it would sastify the M rating? Because I really want to add this story to the ItaHina C2 community, "Tainted". Everyone who enjoys reading ItaHina fics should definitely read this! We should always share and spread the good fics, eh? ;)

    Would really appreciate it if you could take up my request. XD

    Write more! ^_________^
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  • From ANON - wah on September 30, 2005
    That was beautifully written and very touching. Its hard finding hinata x itachi stories, but I think you did a great job.
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  • From ANON - kurai on September 25, 2005
    I really love the story and the charactization of the three of them. It would have been interesting to see more insight from other characters such as Neji. But I understand how the story is centered around the three main characters, the rock, paper and scissors. So it all works out. A true piece of art.

    Now I'll take the time to answer another reviewers questions: Why Hinata? cause hinata is a Hyuuga. Why not marry to influential clans together? It seems like the logical thing a hokage and council of the village would have to continue the Uchiha bloodline, unlike choosing Sakura from a no name clan, despite her being the Hokage's apprentice there is nothing more to her. Not to mention, Hinata is a deeper character, her background is a lot more flushed out in the series compared to Sakura. She understands the pain of duty and being a part of an influencial clan in Konoha. Sakura is a shallow character who basically has an infatuation with Sasuke and nothing more. And I see no indication of anything better about her, even though her new change in the series, she's still weak. Hinata has a gentle strength, not in raw power but in her personality and caring. Something that I can understand how the two Uchiha brothers would like her.

    A sequel would be something I wouldn't mind reading...but it's up to the author. This fic stands great.
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  • From ANON - Love Itachi on August 20, 2005
    No offense, just curious,

    Why Hinata? why not Sakura? Since in main Naruto story I think Sakura had something connection with these two brothers more than Hinata. (I could not imagined Hinata marriage with Sasuke cause they have never talked in main story, no need to refer about Itachi.)

    May be you should write another fic about Sakura/Sasuke/Itachi.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on July 31, 2005
    Good call.To continue would cheapen it.I am very much looking forward to your next peice.Great work so far.Good luck.
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  • From ANON - twiseted-sheets on July 29, 2005
    Beautiful. Not a big fan of the pairing but I loved the way you wrote it out. They were very in character. And now Sasuke is free...

    I hope you do write an epilogue...
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  • From ANON - blisblop on July 28, 2005
    Sobs loudly.Perfect.Don't need to add a word.Kudos,the last chap the most moving,god,you did a great job.Clever concept.Kodos.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on July 28, 2005
    Sobs loudly.Perfect.Don't need to add a word.Kudos,the last chap the most moving,god,you did a great job.Clever concept.Kodos.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on July 21, 2005
    I am surprised Itachi used Hinata this wayhe ,betrayed her really and so vulgarly and he is homophobic?I am shocked.It was disapointing to hear every crass word that squirmed out of his mouth.....,why is this happening?,his brother is the care taker of his son,Sasuke is the best protection that little boy has because of his little brothers skill.I still can't believe he put Hinata and his son in danger to brag to a man he has no respect for ,who hates him ,before he was sure he could win(and he would know chance plays a big part in fights too!)What of Sasukes revenge on his wife and child.I do not understand at all.The battle itself was studded with tight writing,I am also surprised Sasuke let himself be caught, even a bit with the jutsu he had spent most of his life trying to counter.This chapter leaves me feeling blue and kinda dirty.It feels tired.Sorry I can not explain it well.Thank you for the update.Oh,If Sasuke had that insight then why did,
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