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Reviews for Thou Blind Man's Mark

By : Majenta
  • From ANON - R on January 17, 2006
    ... sad. i actually teared!

    the only thing i can't really believe is how you made the pairing actually -work-. i guess when you're insane, pretty much anything goes, though.

    um, rightfully, orosasu shouldn't bring tears to my eyes. but damn did i like it. :)
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  • From ANON - viciouscallisto on December 27, 2005
    damn, this was amazing. this is by far my favorite orosasu fic. i loved how sasuke-kun just succumbed to his madness and turned it into something else...some sort of twisted happy ending for himself. he mentions that he forgot why he came orochimaru-sama but yet he's satisfied with still being with orochimaru-sama. it's like the two are drawn together in their insanity. i loved how you wrote each character: orochimaru-sama wasn't some evil bastard, sasuke-kun wasn't some damsel...they were both themselves: complicated characters who managed to find some sort of mental balance together. excellent fic, i loved it.
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  • From ANON - Eye of Aurora (too lazy to signin) on October 06, 2005
    ARGH, so hot!! Correct me if I am wrong, but I am sort of assuming you have a bit of a crush on Orochimaru? lol As glorious as Sasuke is, it seems lots of raunchy badguy-shipping fangirls love Orochimaru T_T I am a Rock Lee lover, myself...so...lol but hey, I love this. I absolutely adore your writing and style. This is actually quite believable, and Orochimaru sleeping with Sasuke is just immeasurably hot...*trembles* Awesome job. Keep writing! I'm a loyal fan!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 06, 2005
    beautifull....
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 05, 2005
    This is very beautiful! I like it a lot!
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  • From ANON - kiminokaeru on September 17, 2005
    Memorable points:
    Tragic. Sasuke’s characterization. Very shocking circumstances, and well-pulled off.
    Needs Brush up on:
    Nothing, really. Maybe a sequel. ^_^ Well, if I were going to say one thing, it'd be about the title. I know you got your inspiration from this (very good) poem, but it doesn't really fit the story. But that's a small detail.
    Lasting Impression:
    Profound imagery, great take on a complex character. Fascinating idea. (Would love more!)

    Love the mention of the surrounding scenery. The little changes in the room, the snow outside, the mist, the cold underground...this story is full of lovely details.

    Insanity...really isn't that far from losing oneself. Like how Sasuke no longer really remembers even how long he's been there...or when he got there. Or what he came there for. Everything's just slipping away from him.

    I love how Sasuke seems so lost, and just brokenly accepting things as they come. And how he’s become so utterly dependent on Orochimaru. Lovely painting of a lost and broken boy.

    And Orochimaru's there, and we see his personality in glimpses. Like how he sleeps with Sasuke, takes him outside, takes his hand and is so intimately close to Sasuke... Orochimaru puts "His arms around me at night. . .[and brushes] His lips on my forehead.' Orochimaru is very intimate with Sasuke.

    I really enjoyed this short story! I’m so curious about how Sasuke’s life would continue...if everything would just crumble around him, or if he’d find the strength to move away from Orochimaru. And if anyone in Konoha would care that Sasuke’s being used as a whore and has lost his mind. And if anyone would want to help him get better...but then, I’m rather obsessed with making things better. ~_~

    Anyways, great job.
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  • From ANON - fisheggs on September 12, 2005
    Oh. My. God. The world needs more OroSasu like this! ...okay, more OroSasu in general. Thank you so much for writing this! Good job at getting nominated for the Sasuke fanfic contest...that's how I found this gem. THere were only two OroSasu fics!

    Please, oh please, write more like this. ~_~ You're awesome! Amazing story.
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  • From ANON - xxxx on June 19, 2005
    i luv this! its so great! you did a great job showing insane sasuke.
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  • From ANON - frisky on June 13, 2005
    i luv this! great job! write more?
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  • From ANON - Reader on June 11, 2005
    I am a. . .random worshiper who followed the link from Crimson Shade. . .

    I really like the concept of this short story! :shivers: delightful! I love all the descriptions! You really let us peak inside Sasuke's broken mind. Excellent job!

    Oh, please, please write more? At your own pace. ^^ Great job!
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  • From ANON - Funky on June 10, 2005
    I found this from the Crimson Shade website. There are only two OroSasuke! And (obviously) yours is one of them.

    And man, am I glad they put it there! This is GREAT! I don't usually read one-shots, but this was amazing. I love how well you charactarize lost!sasuke. He's so. . .insane. Broken. I love it!! Great job. I hope you write more!!

    I love how Sasuke interprets their relationship. And how even though Sasuke has given up EVERYthing, in the end, Orochimaru winds up not needing him (...my interpretation. You meant that, right?) except as a sex toy. Amazing. Ironic! I crave more. . .good luck with school and everything, by the way.
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  • From ANON - Mei on June 10, 2005
    I love this. It's got insanity, rape, abuse and intreaging inner thoughts. This is just wonderful! I love that it's SASUKE who's going through all of this. Just a wonderful idea. I hope you write more!
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  • From ANON - Kansou on June 03, 2005
    Wow. I really, really enjoyed this. This review will have no organization. . .sorry.

    You did a wonderful job getting Sasuke's thoughts on paper. He seems so lost! I love that this story is about insanity. And inadvertently about Sasuke's choice to go to Orochimaru and the consequences. Wah, this is great. Sasuke is almost definitely disassociating, though. Poor dear!

    I hope someone rescues poor Sasuke. He can't take care of himself anymore and is trapped in an abusive relationship. I feel so strongly for him! Sasuke has suffered enough. He needs to go home and have someone take care of him and help him put himself together. His self-esteem is shot, he thinks he's only useful in bed, he's extremely dependent and his memories are deteriorating. Can you imagine how hard it would be to talk to him?

    . . .I hope you write more. On anything. Man, I loved this. Thanks for sharing! Feel free to write (LOTS!!) more stories about insanity, loss and abuse. You're good at it. XD

    Great job!
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  • From NarakusKoi on May 02, 2005
    Here's your review, as promised :D A most excellent fic. Chock full of angst, sex, and insanity...all the things I love in a story :DDD I sincerely hope you write more ^.~ Will be looking for your work here and on LJ *lovelove*
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  • From ANON - sasu_muffin on May 02, 2005
    WOW. just WOW. You really need to continue this. It was beautifully written. If I had to describe their relationship...if they could even have one, would be exactly like this. Really, wow. I am awed. CONTINUE!
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