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By : karikara
  • From ANON - Iris Anthe on May 05, 2005
    Karikara, this is the most refreshing bit of writing I've read in the entire world of fanfiction in a long time. The character development is true to the series, yet imaginative and deeply insightful. The pacing is delectable. The scenario and plot so far have been wonderfully new, and your writing style, the choice of words, the flow of them, is light and easy yet has just enough quirkiness to keep sparking the little lover of words inside me. I am so pleases that I have found you here. I am wondering if this is your only work so far? Also, though I have not betaed anyone's work in a very long time, I am a notoriously scrupulous beta reader, and just because I like this story so much, I have already beta read all three chapters for typos. There are, unfortunately, a number of them. If you would like me to email the beta to you, please email me at heeropeacecraft@yahoo.com and I will send it to you. I would be more than happy to beta more if you would like as well. If you do not want a beta reader, I understand. I really only give my editing attention to works that thrill me these days, and well...I am thrilled. Keep up the great work. Even if people aren't reviewing you, I assure you that anyone who reads this story is hooked and wanting more. I'll spread the word to let people know to check it out.

    --Iris Anthe
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  • From KuroKen on May 04, 2005
    stellar characterization and allowing for time letting them grow from children into young adults, you do a great job keeping them in character.
    I find the way you give the readers insight into each character's reactions and emotions towards the other, the audience gets to partake in the thirll of discovery along with them.

    I can't wait to read the rest. It is a rather original pairing to say the least, but the way you've handled the setup and development
    not only does it seem plausible, but likely that these two would work well as a couple.

    Now hurry up and give us more :-P !
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  • From ANON - Dark Mystik on May 04, 2005
    weee~! please contiune wiriting ^^ i always love to read fanfics with more unique pairings!! i love what you have written so far *^^* i can't wait for more updates from you =)
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  • From ANON - darkarch on May 03, 2005
    dude, this is pretty cool. i like the way you write, and the charcters are very much IC. much w00tage!
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  • From ANON - Namine on May 03, 2005
    Kakoii!!! onegai, proceed! :DDD
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  • From ANON - The Gandhara on May 03, 2005
    I can only praise you and praise you for such a good and deep portrayal of the characters.
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  • From ANON - sorviball on May 03, 2005
    I really liked this a lot. I think Gaara's confusion is perfect, and Hinata is just so sweet. I was a little put off by how at ease she seemed, but I must say that I like this Hinata a lot better than the shy one. My only note is that Gaara's brother is Kankurou...hehe, the spelling was a little off. Anyway, keep up the good work. The way you portray Gaara, I can totally see it. Haha, and I thought it was hilarious how he decided he was going to fight her after she told him love is like a fight. It was so cute. I think you're doing a great job so update soon!
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  • From ANON - Sessy-sama on May 03, 2005
    I liked this very much. The way you portrayed Hinata's empathy was very nice. I myself believe Hinata does have the potential to be the best at simply reading people BECAUSE of her empathy, while the rest of the clan has such powerful control and properness it causes them to lose a few things. ::claps:: I enjoyed the characterization of Gaara as well. I will be waiting to see where you take this.
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  • From ANON - morgannia on May 02, 2005
    hmmm, an interesting beginning. so far, i'm really enjoying the interaction between Gaara & Hinata, like when she got him to introduce himself despite the obvious. so since Hinata is free to leave Kohona, is she going to traveling deeper into the Sand with q certain red-head? lol, we can only hope, i suppose :D
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  • From ANON - The Gandhara on May 01, 2005
    Very interesting. The background you've created is quite good and detailed.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on May 01, 2005
    Solid start,everyone i.c. so far as your fic goes.I feel good about this.Luck.
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  • From ANON - Spitfire666 on April 30, 2005
    Oh wow...the summary is very misleading, you know! I thought that this might have been a PWP, but I got lucky and found a well-developed and very well-written GaaHina fic. ^_^ I can't tell you how much I like GaaHina, it's EXTREMELY pleasing to find a fic where the pacing is nice and slow and the characters are IN character. I very much like the imagery in the fic, as I can see everything very clearly. I also can't wait for the "encounter", so to speak. ^_~

    Hope to see more of this soon!
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