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Reviews for Teamwork - The Night

By : Askerian
  • From Invader_web on January 13, 2022

    Love it!


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  • From ANON - Shatter the Sky Comes Quietly on March 16, 2011
    The formatting for this and several of your other stories went weird. There's some visible java and the paragraphs are all broken up. Can you fix it please?
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  • From KumfuMinou on November 16, 2010
    Et voici donc la nuit avant "Teamwork" !

    Hum... j'ai été assez surprise. Je ne m'attendais pas à quelque chose d'aussi... "violent", dans un sens. Je dois être trop romantique ! ^^ Les sentiments entre les personnages m'ont un peu manqué. J'aurais aimé les voir plus apparaitre, même si leur rapport reste aussi "bestial", mais ça vient peut-être du fait que le texte soit en POV Sasuke ? J'aurais aimé plus de paroles, aussi, même pas beaucoup mais juste un peu : l'absence de dialogue m'a un peu gênée. ça fait partie des choses qui ont fait que les sentiments/ce qui lie les personnages, autant amicalement qu'au niveau de leur désir, me sont apparus moins évidents que dans "Teamwork".

    Pour autant, j'ai apprécié de lire ce one-shot qui répond à mes interrogations sur cette première scène. Merci, donc ! ^^
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  • From Shadowmaiden3 on December 05, 2009
    Just about passed out from blood loss, thank you very much. Jeez that was HHhhoottt! Loved it, absolutely loved it. The way everything they said was implied and there was not much description except for random details that stuck in the mind gave the whole thing a dream like feel, absolutely perfectly executed.
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  • From AubreyWitch on January 02, 2008
    Ah, man I can't believe this doesn't have more reviews. I have to admit I was a bit wary of the NaruSasuSaku dynamic since I tend to prefer Naruto in the middle/more of a focus on NaruSaku out of the three but everyone got equal attention and it was completely hot hot hot and I think you did a great job getting Sasuke's perspective down. A+ rating in my book! XD
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  • From Kimra on August 05, 2007
    I don't know how many times I havwe to read this before I get sick of it, but I suspect the number is either very high or non-existant. I love this story and re-reading it is always fun. :D
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  • From ANON - kami-sama on April 29, 2007
    This has helped explain what lead to Teamwork for it confused me so.
    But good writer you are an impresivly prisice person.
    As it has become my "way" to do I shal grade your work!

    A+ on fallow up

    A+ on story

    A on being presice

    S on writing

    and

    B on length.

    oveer all you get an *S++*
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  • From Kitanith on January 25, 2007
    And this is why we love you...porny or not :P :)
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  • From ANON - lindsei on October 08, 2006
    that story was the biznatch. it was the est ive read so far. you write like the best stories ever. keep up the awesome work. *mwah*
    love much,
    Lindsei
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  • From animeaddict666 on August 13, 2006
    Yeah...this is the ONLY lemon I've ever SAVED, so that I may drool over it at will. I'm serious. I don't normally bother with saving plot-less porn (even if this is from a plot-based story), but this shit it HOT...
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  • From ANON - kyuubigirl on June 21, 2006
    Oh shit is all I have to say. Um, can I like borrow this Naruto and, uh, take him home for a while. Man... he just gave and gave and gave. Sakura is a lucky girl, and that Sasuke boy should have been taking notes. I'd love to wake up to that scenario in the morning. But where the hell did Naruto learn all that? I have got to fan myself, wow. Naruto. Hot Hot Hot.
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  • From ANON - Feion Phylar on January 27, 2006
    WOW.....W-O-W


    That was so freaking hot...Its hard to find threesomes of team seven but this has got to be the BEST! Oh my god! Naruto is a freaking SEX GOD! Woot! I loved how he just took control...*_* Like a MAN...Ugh...*Fans self*

    I would love to see more of this deliciousness...Mmm mm mm...
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2005
    oh dear that was really good. even got me alittle wet!
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  • From Tigerlily7prb on November 20, 2005
    Ahhh...more literary crack. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on October 25, 2005
    Love it,again.
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