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Reviews for The Proud Green Bet (take 2)

By : FireSpark
  • From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2007
    Funniest fucking thing ever.
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  • From ANON - blacknoise on November 22, 2006
    Best. Crackfic. EVER.

    I was in paroxysms the whole time. You totally have a gift for the glib and the cracky.
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  • From ANON - protogirl on October 28, 2006
    omg this is too funny...but I wish I could see more Gailee crack goodnes though XD

    still interesting pairings and just too funny for words!!!!!

    nice job btw

    too lazy to sign in
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  • From ANON - NeoMT will never log in.. on October 02, 2006
    Alright. I guess I enjoyed it even though it put my faourite man into a subjective light by his peers and elder. Maito Gai deserves so much better though... not saying stuff about the pairing.
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  • From Noctivagus on February 13, 2006
    That was...transcendantly funny.

    I've just gotten into the fandom and have yet to see some of the characters (Tsunade) presented, but this was recommended, and I couldn't resist, and I don't regret it! The cunnilingus part of was so beyond hilarious. And then "LEE!" Oh, my God, so great.
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  • From AngelicPixie on February 09, 2006
    I don't normally read lots but this was really good.

    FREAKING AWESOME STORY OMIG OMIG!!!

    MORE!


    Oh yes, and to reply to your comment on my ALISHA story? It is in erotica/sex because in the further chapters thats the category it lies under. I have my whole story (in bits n pieces of course) all scattered in my head...and I didn't want to change the category...so suck it up and be patient for the sex stuff :P

    Thanks for posting, i can't add anymore chapters until they take their damn hold off..grr...
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on August 22, 2005
    That was hilarious! I will never forget the part where Tsunade's genjutsu gets cancelled. LOL!
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  • From ANON - Amy-sama on June 08, 2005
    I loved it. I laughed and giggled through the whole thing. It is nice to see some fan-fic with humor. Great way to stay IC. Write some more just for the laughs. I know I'll read them!
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  • From ANON - agent m on April 30, 2005
    "Lee!!"


    HAHAHA!!!! I KNEW IT!!! XD
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  • From ANON - Catullus on April 28, 2005
    Genius. Really. This fic is both hysterical and hot. (Is it wrong that I have dirty thoughts about Gai-sensei?) I don't usually read het- but a pairing with Gai? That proved too tempting, thank god you didn't let me down. Really you deserve way more reviews than you've gotten. It's those shallow NaruSasu shippers, they don't appreciate anything else. Anyway, I think my favorite line (one of many) was the "I wanna Rocks!" Priceless, truely priceless. My roommate wanted to know what the hell I was laughing so hard at- but there wasn't a good explanation for the nonNaruto fan. She may think I'm a freak- but it was worth it.
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  • From ANON - Kitty Kat on April 26, 2005
    That was UNBELIEVABLY great!!! I laughed...I cried...and then I laughed even harder!!! I can't wait until the next chapter!! I especially love the fact that you keep this centered around the adult characters, it's a change from all those other Naruto fics, I love the jounins and Tsunade! ^^
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  • From ANON - Redwyrm on April 23, 2005
    This story is good!

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  • From ANON - Diane on April 23, 2005
    Oh it's been a while since I have laughed that much, I was howling in front of my computer, just a chance I didn't read it by night cause the neighbours would have just killed me!
    I had such a great time reading it!
    My first big laugh was poor Tsunade without her genjutsu.
    The second one was when Gai opened the Gates just to finish Tsunade. Poor Gai, now he xertainly will train his tongue!
    Third laugh was when he cried out Lee's name!
    I had so many tears in my eyes I couldn't read any more! My jaw is killing me from too many laughs.
    Thank you so much!
    (I don't usually read het, but the summary was attracting and I really don't regret it one second!)
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