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By : Askerian
  • From Shadowmaiden3 on December 05, 2009
    Gawd, that's good and I'm not even half way through.
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  • From riddlestar on February 28, 2008
    aaaa.. im sure you think its wierd getting a review for this so long after its been updated..but i just found this even though ive been on this site for at least a year *shock*.. i cannot believe i missed this.
    OMMMGGGG... this is one of the best naruto fics ever!! i know i havent read the last two chapters yet but its really late and im sleepy and i wanted to review today.. ill prolly leave another review after i finsih the 7th but anyway...
    wow, i am amazed at the brilliance of your writing. its simple, with none of the sugary flowery adverb-y fics that most of the authors ( including me to some extent, lol) subject everyone too. its a breath of fresh air that im grateful for coming across.
    i love how you made Sakura so much in character.. though she does come across as a little cry baby ish but its totally understandable..and im wondering whther you wrote this before shipuuden? i dont understand how people can made her evil to Naruto in their fics.. though i suppose its creative licence.
    Sasuke is a bastard..but thats how we all love him. the Kyuubi interaction with him was HAWWT. im really looking fwd to that smut. *giggles*
    and Naruto.. you've captured him perfectly. i felt my heart clench with the whole council, orphan thing. sniff. someone really needs to take care of him too.. and sakura and sasuke are the perfect ones.
    anyway, before i scare you (and myself) with the length of this, i shall sign off.

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  • From ANON - Sara on February 26, 2008
    I love this story! ^-^
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  • From ANON - andrew on July 27, 2007
    this was is a great story. you took parts of the story that were not explained in the manga and made it huge. explaining the seal on naruto was very smart but , it was an awsome story.
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  • From yeagerbomb on March 23, 2007
    What did a nice, respectable, barely seventeen-year-old girl tell her parents when she decides to shack up with two guys, one of whom - no clue which - got her pregnant?
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    ahh!! it was all goo at the end. great job, i loved this, every word, and now i'll read the sequels!!~
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  • From yeagerbomb on March 22, 2007
    How utterly -- rude!"
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    "... I see the wild, untamed wench would fit the theme better..."
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    "It's the woman who's given away, you -- cretin!!"
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    We'll spring you out, burn the Council house down, and move to another village."
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    oh, that was great.... okay, last chapter, and then it's to bed with me!! ... or maybe i'll read it tomorrow...~
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  • From yeagerbomb on March 22, 2007
    "Sure, okay, he's pretty to look at, but my dick would freeze and fall off if it went within a meter of his ass. He's even more of an icy bitch than you are."
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    aww... i liked this chapter. sasuke falling asleep was cute, i have to say. i'm loving this, and so won't delay myself and read the next chapter!!~
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  • From yeagerbomb on March 22, 2007
    i loved the beastiality comments between naruto and kyuubi
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    decided not to think at all while he hunted, because he'd just run face first into a tree.
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    they both saw him wince discretely and 'misplace' his food down the tree
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    ... um... great chapter. i'm kinda scared... kyuubi's being crazy, not that he ISN'T crazy, and he's driving naruto coo-coo!! not cool, fox, not. cool. anyway, imma read the next chapter!!~
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  • From yeagerbomb on March 21, 2007
    He suppressed a smirk when his teammate only managed about thirty of them. He would so tease him later
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    okay! great chapter three too! i really wanna see what happens, but! it is time to sleep. school tomorrow... damn, i have a test...~
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  • From yeagerbomb on March 21, 2007
    He was fucking ogling Uzumaki Dead-Last Naruto.
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    especially not the waking-up-after-a-good-hard-fuck kind of naked
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    And it didn't matter if Naruto's eyes were red or blue or fucking gold with pink polka dots.
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    AAAAAAH!!! that was a... i don't know, kinda deppressing, but i totally saw the pregnancy thing coming, sorta 2nd chapter!!! i don't know what to THINK!!! ... i guess i'll chapter three then.~
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  • From yeagerbomb on March 21, 2007
    Why was she bothering to think about the softness of Sasuke's hair when she was supposed to think about WHY THE HELL SHE WAS NAKED IN BED WITH SASUKE AND NARUTO?? Okay, being in bed with Sasuke was her dream, but what was that stupid, crazy blond ... hunk... /wow, nice shoulders- wait, scratch that, nice ASS/- ack!!! What the hell was she thinking about? That was Naruto, not some piece of eyecandy
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    /And with our pussy hurting as if we'd tried to ride a fucking kangaroo in a rodeo-/
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    okay, so yeah... the first time i posted this review, it cut it off, so i go again... i'm reveiwing as i read, and i'm randomly inserting the best quotes, so... bear with me. this was a great chapter, and i'm all excited about this. i've already read the prequel thing that shows the night before, and that was HOT. thanks for writing.~
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  • From conquerorsstar on January 21, 2007
    oh oh oh!! and i also love the sasunarusasu can't forget that..because c'mon how can they care about each other that much without LOVIN each other, eh? eh? hahah so that's why team 7 threesomes are perfect ^_^
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  • From conquerorsstar on January 21, 2007
    ah that was so CUUUUTE ^_^ i absolutely adore sakura but she kinda pissed me off near the beginning when she didn't want to keep the baby..but then i thought of how i would feel if i got pregnant this young and i was like nyuuu >.< so i forgave her lol. and i LOVE the way you portrayed her, excellent. ah i love team 7 threesomes sooo much :) because i want sakura with sasuke because i couldn't imagine sasuke with any other chick (and also none of them deserve him... bleh, and they're ADORABLE together!!) but i also feel so sorry for naruto and i want him to finally get her after all those years of unrequitted love... and they're also adorable together. so this solves it perfectly!! :D i haven't read the sequal yet but the idea of sakura and sasuke getting married kind of scares me because i don't want poor naruto-kun to get left out :( *tear lol. but since they're gonna live together... yay.

    i thought the characters were really well done and in character and all that jazz


    and i just wanted to say I LOVE yOU!!! definitely my new favorite fic. perfect amount of romance and angst and humor and umm sexual reference? lol. it was just amazing.
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  • From ANON - NeeN on December 30, 2006
    LLLLOOOOVVVVEEEEEEEEE ITTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BEST EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - NeeN on December 30, 2006
    LLLOO0VVVEEE ITTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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