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Reviews for Ii Otenki Desu Ne?

By : sorviball
  • From ANON - Anon on April 15, 2005
    I liked it. Keep it up.
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  • From shikachan on April 14, 2005
    Yes, you should totally continue this story ~^-^~ I love Shikmaru and Temari, they are just the cutest couple ever, and you them really well too =D (although Temari was a bit OOC)
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  • From ANON - patosan on April 14, 2005
    It'd be nice if you kept the POV consistent, and you jumped a couple of scenes without tying them together properly. If you'd sorted those out and had taken your time and expanded on the ideas you had here, I think you'd have had a real winner going on here. The characterization was great, the tone of the fic was really nice and all and all I know I'll be checking out the next chapter if you put it out. But if you want to make it memorable, I'd recommend you work on those tidbits a little and not be afraid of making longer chapters :D I think you have the talent to write really well if you work a little more.

    Good luck!
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  • From Trollmia on April 14, 2005
    Of course you should continue... I would love to read more of this story.
    And the pairing is just sizzling.. :)
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  • From ANON - Zak on April 14, 2005
    please continue
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  • From ANON - Kagalli on April 13, 2005
    Hey, I wouldnt mind reading more! I absolutely love this pairing! I'm crazy about them!
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  • From ANON - swordmasterdrg on April 13, 2005
    Wow...just wow. That's one of the best Shikamaru/Temari stories that I've read in a LONG time and yes, you should continue this story, it rocks.
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