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Reviews for Crossed Paths

By : shikachan
  • From apogee on October 16, 2007
    dude update soon, that fic rocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon!
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  • From ANON - Mistya on January 03, 2007
    Really though, it's been forever since I've seen an update on this! Can I ever hope to see one? I really enjoy reading this story, you've got to update!! I like where it's going with the 'missing-nin' thing. You should have her and Gaara convince Naruto and Shino to like go ahead or something and then escape! ...That sucks doesn't it? But no matter what...DO NOT LET HER GO BACK TO KONOHA!! And just a thought maybe put in how everyone in Konoha reacted to Sakura and Shikamaru's escapade!! Please update, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!
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  • From ANON - mel on August 11, 2006
    I really like this story. This is the first Sakura/Gaara pairing. It seems that you are working up to it slowly, but the plot seems to be well thought out. I look forward to reading more. Please keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on August 05, 2006
    This has been the only decent Gaara/Sakura fic I have come across so far (by all means direct me to a better one.) You better not give up on this, ill be so uberly pissed off...Even your relitives will feel my pissyness, radiating from your computer, seeping into your bedroom late at night. They will all be all like, wtf is that ebilness that seems to be coming from your cushy bed. And then the ebilness will take my form, and ill steal all your blankets! So you better finish this, or its gunna be a cold...cold night. O.o;;; Heh ^_^ Write me when the next chapter comes out, or ill rummage through your clothes, and take all the neat outfits for my own! *Holds up a pair of unders.* O.o Eesh!
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  • From ANON - poornmiserable on January 08, 2006
    very interesting fic.........i love where u are going with this.............could u not have used hinata though, i dunno she dosent seem like the typeto be fawning over sasuke........anyway very awesome story love how u portray garaa and sakura .........please update soon
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  • From ANON - ... on August 16, 2005
    Great. Update.
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  • From Jimaine on July 15, 2005
    hehe i love your story soo far. Yeah Shino showed up! He is like one of my favrit charicters! My first fic is about him lol. You should read it! anyways...about your story. I love it! I love Gaara as well. I have to admit the begining wiht sasuke being such a brat was very depresting. Also i don't know as i see Hinata agreeing to sleep with Sasuke like that but hey, it's your stroy! Pluse i soo want to see Gaara get some loving, he needs it :) Well please keep wrtting it is all soo good, espicaily when gaara tells Sakura about what happened to him. The only thing i can recamend for that seen is intermixing sakura's reactions too what he is saying. Otherwize it is just kinda recap for all of us that have seen the serias. So yeah that would be kewl, ohh an dSikamaru and Temari soo need to get together hehe those two are sooo cute lol! (Don't know if you read the Manga are not but they hang out more later) ANyways i'm rambling now lol. Soo yeah if you like Shino read mine and tell me what you think! I would value your opinion because i like your writting so much. It's called Finding What You've Lost. :)I LOVE YOUR STROTY!!!!
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  • From ANON - ... on July 15, 2005
    awwww, that's so sweet, pls update soon...
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  • From ANON - TobiasX on July 08, 2005
    Okay... I've bookmarked the page, now I'm BEGGIN YOU, PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY!!! I love the cliffhanger that you left it on, but please keep going. :)
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  • From ZiriOkamiotoko on May 08, 2005
    Okay, I have some minor complaints, and I'm not trying to be mean. No author's notes in the middle of a story, please. It breaks up the flow, and disrupts the reader's train of thought, yanking them out of the world you're creating. Please, for the sake of your story, don't do it. Something you've written might amuse you, but please, don't break up a paragraph to point it out. Save that for the end of the chapter. Another thing is, please make sure you don't change tenses. You sometimes shift from past tense to present tense, and it throws off a reader. Another thing is you shouldn't need to flash back to things presented in the anime or manga. Most fans should know about those. You can reference to them, but you don't have to describe it in detail.

    It was an interesting concept, and you took on a different aspect of this pairing than the other writers tried. I'm glad that people enjoy your work, and I wish you good luck with this piece. Much love. ~ Kuro Okami
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  • From ANON - Elisa Ardell on April 30, 2005
    Ohhh, it's getting exciting. I can't wait to read more. ^^ Please keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading your next chapter once it's posted.
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  • From ANON - Elisa Ardell on April 26, 2005
    OHHHH!!! Please write more. I really like where this is going. And it's written so well, Cudos (think that's how you spell it :p) to you!!!!
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  • From ANON - Vaz1201 on April 16, 2005
    THAT BASTERD!!....sorry but he was just so wrong on the..GAH!! >O< Please bring in Gaara soon! ^^ It was still good, even though it was sad -__- damn Sasuke. I hope he dies! >O
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  • From ANON - meow on April 16, 2005
    two words....kill him!

    I love the story though! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - rosiel sama on April 14, 2005
    ignore that I'm an idiot and posted that last review to the wrong story sorry *slaps self*

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