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Reviews for Blindsided

By : nescione
  • From ANON - Lell on October 11, 2005
    Author's notes are fun ^^ They help us all get into your mind which is definitely delightful.

    Read all the chapters as fast as I could and I've come to this conclusion....will you have my babies? *Laughs* Seriously though; the slow pace sets the scene wonderfully and it actually shows you have plot (omg! plot! wtf??111?1? XD) That and I am envious of how well you pitch the sand siblings' relationship. I heart your Temari very much.
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  • From ANON - Shadows of Nyx on October 06, 2005
    Intrusting. Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - shadedfaith on August 30, 2005
    Oh wow, tis very lovely ^^
    Urgh, I'm not exactly good at reviewing so I'll just say 'zOMG, update soon please'
    And yaaaay!
    Hm, I might have been able to give you something better if I weren't in a rush.
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  • From kaze on August 17, 2005
    Oooh. You have my attention! I'm really enjoying this so far...I like the characterizations, and the plot is good. I don't think you slaughtered Sasuke much at all, but there is a bit of OOC'ness surrounding him. Not very worrisome though ^__^ I love the interaction between Naruto and Jiraya, and also your portrayal of the kitsune. Write more, please! ^_____^
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  • From ANON - Kat on August 16, 2005
    Oooo, interesting and lovely. Can't wait for the hook ups! And yay! Kankouro! He needs more screen time I swear!
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  • From ANON - Black Sand Gara on August 14, 2005
    Woot! Someone else who is going to Otakon! Maybe i'll see you there!
    I love your story by the way! I like the way you are playing everyone. And I think the Sasuke going on the ship should be very intersting to see where that goes. I can't wait to see how Naruto, Gaara, and Sasuke are going to get together, will how the stories going now i'm not really sure how there are going to get together which is really cool because most of the time I can tell almost from the start how the story is going to work out, but with this one i can't really tell. Ooh and why no Kakashi and Iruka I think they are one of the best pairs in Naruto. Of couse Naruto, Gaara, and Sasuke have to be number one! But I love your story and hope that it will conitine to be as great as it is now!

    Until Next Time

    ~Gara of the Black Sand
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on June 15, 2005
    OMG, this fic is AMAZING!!! *glomps* ^^ I absolutely love it -- your characterizations and descriptions are both wonderful and refreshing, and I simply adore your writing style!!! *gives you chocolates* A very neat idea -- I can't wait to find out what happens next!!! ^___^ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 14, 2005
    Yes,Kakashi is treated as less than onnipitant,I loved the touch Tsunade puts on him then throws him,then its "go fetch".Iruka:" he had a con mans smile",absolutely,I am speackless,never thought of it that way before but of course, how else could he be good at everything and trusted enough to raise the children to chunin and come across as bland and unnoticable.That really rocks. Tsu and Jir interchange,Why should I stop now,refering to blamming Jir against the wall for "trying".Even Sasukes' snake had a solid character sketched in,It felt responsible for him,god,thats so cute {I have a pet snake 'Kaa") so I am open to snakey ways. Yup,I am just thrilled to death with this work".Superior workmanship,best quality"(line from Bladerunner") Ignore bad spelling,up for 40 plus,wonkiness making me sloppy.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 14, 2005
    This is VERY original.It visualises amazingly well,its exciting,multitasking with the layers of plot.Just really solid work by an obviously serious(?) fan.Just some boom shit.The characacters are IC and the pace for the first Two chapters would make a rippingly good opening to a movie.
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on June 11, 2005
    Very interesting developments. The fight was yummy, and I enjoyed your interpretation of iruka as well. There is a special place in my heart for "Iruka is stronger that he looks" characterizations.

    The encounter with Kabuto was interesting, and I'm not too certain why the traitor would be so eager to fight Naruto. He must no that at this point he's horribly outmatched.

    Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on June 11, 2005
    Wow!

    So does Naruto find him?

    Or does Sasuke track him down?

    Or does the Konoha Anbu find him?


    Keep up the awesome work. Coolsa.
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  • From ANON - Mikkeneko on June 11, 2005
    I'm not even in the Naruto fandom per se, but this fic was wonderful. *applauds* Hope you update it soon!
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  • From ANON - Kai on May 13, 2005
    oooh! goodyness!!! I LOVE GAANARU!!!!!!! YOU ROCK!!!!! COOKIES AND HUGGLES!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2005
    this was a really good chapter. Good story in general I should say actually. The only thing that could have improve the end of the chapter would be more of an argument about looking for Sasuke and leaving kohona from Naruto.
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  • From ANON - Pellaz on May 06, 2005
    Wow, this is very good. You're an excellent writer and your characterization is wonderful, especially Naruto, who is absolutely spot-on. I'm amazed that you've managed to juggle great plot, writing, and characterization - awesome job. I can't wait to see more of this.
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