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Reviews for The Konoha Lotus (of love) Blooms Thrice :D

By : Momomel
  • From JadedGothButterfly on July 31, 2008
    Oh.My.God.That Was Remarkably Hot.I Just Can't Wait For The Next Installment. =D

    I Loved It Even If I'm Not Into Yaoi/Yuri.That's How Good It Was. ^^
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  • From ANON - Buras_Mew on July 13, 2005
    XD
    Poor Hinata... I hope she doesn't faint again... ^^'''''''''
    Please continue your story.
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  • From ANON - Saico on July 02, 2005
    Not bad, but it looks as if you don't know what to do with the characters. I think you need to plan your story better. Why don't you start with some yaoi between Sasuke and Naruto while Hinata just looks, hidden. Then when they're finished they discover her and invite her to join.
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  • From ANON - Cards344 on June 30, 2005
    UPDATE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on April 16, 2005
    This is PWP so the only thing I could say is the flow is ragged.The things Sas say are kinda hokey a couple times but I am finding that funny,I mean it is funny and sexy.More detail when it comes to the sex.I am totally confused how Sas got there but who cares!
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  • From ANON - yoroshiku on March 23, 2005
    wow... so, when's the next chappie?
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on March 10, 2005
    Is Sasuke mad about the interruption? Does he want Naruto in girl mode, guy mode, or just at all? Interesting fic. Keep up the interesting work. coolsa.
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  • From ANON - The Gandhara on March 09, 2005
    I'm crying in happiness right now! A SasuNaruHina threesome! Thank you, thank you, thank you! Whoever you are, I wish you long life and good fortune!

    The first chapter was very good. Naruto's scenes with Hinata and Sasuke were a good preparation for what was to come. However, the second chapter was of a lesser level. It seemed as if you were in a hurry. I guess you only intended for Sasuke and Naruto to foreplay a bit for the moment, but the sex scene of them was barely skimmed over. It needs a bit more of detail. The moment Hinata appeared was a bit weird, she immediately showed herself, without hesitating. And she wasn't as embarrassed as I'd expect from her. She didn't stammer at seeing two boys having sex (one of them being her love), nor tried to apologize for peeping. Besides, I think you should have developed and showed Naruto's inner thoughts a bit more. You hint that it was Hinata, and not Sakura, whom he really wanted in a subconscious level, and he hadn't realized, but I think you must make it more evident, or else it looks like he went for Hinata for no reason at all.
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  • From ANON - Dead Last on March 09, 2005
    KUKUKUKUKUKU!!! this makes me chuckle!! Write more! (Thumb's up!) *grin*
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  • From ANON - Tsugath on February 26, 2005
    LOL, the line "All he could do was marvel at his best friend's organ as though it were some rare specimen of beauty and prestige." Has to be one of the funniest ways to describe the male member that I have ever read. Sorry, I know you probably didn't mean it to be hilarious, but that line and Sasuke, hehehehe. Can't wait to read more.


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  • From ANON - Sukara on February 26, 2005
    Waiii!!! I can't wait untill next chapter!!!! Well i probably but I'll just suffer from waitng!!! ^_^ Keep up teh good work, Ne?

    Ja Ne!! ^_^
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