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Reviews for Those Things You Do

By : Inchandall
  • From ANON - jadetiger on February 08, 2005
    oh not bad, hope to see more too, and more info on those bars that is holding everone in there, and why don't they just bread down the cave walls, or use that earth element ninjutisu to go threw them?? i see a few loop holes and it could you a little more detail in the peoples interaction, but other then that i give it a 8 out of 10, very good work!
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  • From ANON - Monkey Lady on February 08, 2005
    This is a very nice start! It's shaping up to be a great story, I think. :) I look forward to Chapters 3 and beyond.
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  • From ANON - kieshar on February 08, 2005
    you definitely have my attention. Please continue.
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