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Reviews for Lines

By : Sintari
  • From yersifanel on May 30, 2007
    You know what?, that was just too sexy, I like it.
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  • From SkippingAlice on February 21, 2007
    I have a feeling their little onlooker was Hinata, and it wasn't really clear what exactly Neji wanted to get across to her, but otherwise, great job! Always nice to have a Hyuuga beg.
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  • From ANON - loveslave on October 11, 2006
    yay! it's so hard to find a good neji naru fic,let alone an amazing one! thank you for writing this!
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  • From ANON - Tricycle on August 26, 2005
    WOW... .this was undoubtedly the best NejiNaru lemon I've ever read!! It was just so goddamn hot, and it hit EVERY SINGLE ONE of my buttons, from the fact that you made them jounins, the fact that Naruto was top yet he was shorter than Neji (mmm this is wonderful), the light almost-BDSM, and how uke and sexy Neji is, without being too much of a ho. And of course, the fact that Neji is so.. chill about it, at the beginning. The part where he lifted up his shirt was just... amazing, and amazingly sexy. I love this!!!
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  • From NarakusKoi on July 23, 2005
    Very hot PWP. *fans self* I am indebted to you for writing such a masterful piece of erotic fiction *bows* I'll look forward to more excellent stories from a master author.
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  • From ANON - qu on May 01, 2005
    You... won't believe how turned on I am by this... GOD THAT WAS HOT.

    I want you to continue this for some odd, odd reason ^^;; But YEAH Awesome story!
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  • From Isilme on March 16, 2005
    I liked this a lot even if I didn't consider the pairing before ^^U Well written and very high-temperature yaoi (just as I like) Great!
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  • From ANON - redfox9t on March 12, 2005
    i really liked it please make another chapter soon...very
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  • From ANON - ST on March 07, 2005
    is this one shot? i hope not. i rather liked this.
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  • From ANON - teaspoon on February 16, 2005
    This sounds like such a good story, have you considered making it a series? I would love to read more from these two. Especially when you did a good job setting it up.
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  • From ANON - ... on February 05, 2005
    Wow...that was really hot. I never knew i could like a Yaoi pairing w/o Kakashi like that
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  • From ANON - Midori on January 29, 2005
    I think that you should definatly do a pequil for this. Like maybe the mission you mentioned, that started it all. This is an excellent one-shot though.Your use of description and subject matter is very good. "Lines" definatly stands well on it's own. Maybe I just think you should write a prequil because "Lines" was so good.^-^ One question though. I know I'm slow and it's probably pretty obvious but who is this "other person" Naruto and Neji were talking about. Hinata? I don't know, I'm only a little ways into the Chuunin Exams. Let me please know.:)

    Great job!!

    Midori Tachibana ^-^
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  • From ANON - archermartyr on January 28, 2005
    This is quite possibly my favorite Naruto fanfiction ever. So hot. It's stories like this that make me question SasuNaru as THE pairing and wonder why Neji isn't in everything. I enjoyed it so much, thanks for writing it.
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  • From ANON - michirukoshi on January 26, 2005
    ^^ This is wonderfully written!
    I love the descriptions so much--
    The diction and rhetorical strategies used are fantastic.
    Great job!! :clap:
    I look forward to more of your writing! It's GREAT!!!
    ~michi~
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  • From ANON - blisblop on January 26, 2005
    That was so nice,the true meaning of the word mind you.Your writing style is smooth, the story was hot and I loved the end.Well done.
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