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Reviews for Bitter Like Me

By : TenshiKaitou
  • From ANON - teaspoon on January 24, 2005
    haha...nooooo dont'get lazy, if you don't write then I can't have anything to procrastinate my work with! Please Update, the plot is good! Type!
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on January 22, 2005
    gawd! i loved this chapter! that was even more unexpected than the unexpected thing i thought would happen! please update super fast! i love your fic!
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  • From ANON - Marshmallow-Chan on January 22, 2005
    I really have to ask...is English your first language? Because the language of the fiction is horribly garbled. Word tense is awful. It makes it hard to follow and I had to make leaps of ligic to figure out exactly what you were trying to say. I suggest a beta reader, because the summary sounds promising, but the text fails to follow through. With a beta reader, you can work on fixing the language and focus on the story development more...because that's a little knotty too O_o Sorry, but it is!
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on January 21, 2005
    Oohhh....I can't wait to find out what happens!!! ^___^ Oh, and here: *hands you a box of chocolates* ...this is for updating!!! Now...go write more!!!
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  • From ANON - Liliath on January 20, 2005
    awe, man, don't be laze and update coz this storys really good ^_~
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  • From ANON - darkangel on January 19, 2005
    *whine* wait!!!! you can't just leave me hanging here. i wanna know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lara on January 18, 2005
    yey!! an angsty fic!!! i dont know if its just me, but i get sick of all the sappy stories after awhile!! there's nothing quite like good old angst!! i applaud you for writing this story!!!!i cant wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Teaspoon on January 14, 2005
    lol I read a couple of tragic endings and i have to say i'm biased against them. I feel soo drained and with nothing to hold on to. put all the tragedy you wantin the plot but not on the ending! Otherwise warn me ahead of time! So far the two chapters you have here are very interesting and I can't wait to see whats the proof naruto has for sasuke !!!!
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  • From ANON - tsu on January 12, 2005
    LOVE IT!Please continue!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Rhenoah on January 10, 2005
    Oh no!! ANGST?!?!?!?! I'm really more the happy go lucky fic type person but I'll take my share of angst. It looks great so far, and it would be wicked if you did do a alternate ending you know for us saps.


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  • From ANON - kat8cha on January 10, 2005
    What? WHAT?!?! What are they looking at!?!?!?! EVIL!!!!! ~pounces and glares~ You better post more soon! Or I will soo .... do something!
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  • From ANON - Liliath on January 10, 2005
    really cool story. the drama and suspense its killing me and I cant wait fot the NaruIta part^^ please update soon!!^^
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  • From ANON - clowangel on January 10, 2005
    You're going to turn this into a tragedy all the way? Darn.. I really really dont like angst. It's soo.. well, boring. -_-; Cant you make it more Naruto-like? Where there's comedy? stupidity? and useless crap? and just a tad bit of angst?
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  • From ANON - kenshinjunkie03 on January 09, 2005
    why did you make naruto and sasuke personalities switch? this is a good story but it's sad to see sasuke like that.
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  • From ANON - Yami Jay on December 31, 2004
    Naruto is that bitter? Ouch!
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