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Reviews for ita/naru drabble

By : moonprincess90
  • From OrochiGreel on March 23, 2008
    adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=38865 does not exist anymore.
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  • From ANON - arora on October 02, 2005
    good, almost like a poem or something. i liked it alot.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on August 03, 2005
    Sure!Has lots of promice.You liiiike Itachi.I do too.Thanks
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  • From ANON - silverfox on March 27, 2005
    DAMN that was a really mean thing to do making it so short i love ita/naru. hope you make a fic with this pair i would really like to read it, there arn't to many stories with ita/naru which makes me kinda sad/mad but i think you did really well on this.
    so if your in the mood and dont mind writing a fic with this couple you should really do it and i'll make sure to R/R!!

    WELL UNTIL THE NEXT TIME HOPEFULLY, BYE BYE!!!
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  • From ANON - campurr on December 18, 2004
    I think your writing would be much better if the boys had erotic/emotional/threatening dialouge with one another,more plot to make it,the story more suspencful.That said I'm sure writing is difficult as it is but you have stated,now,time to experiment improve,if you need someone to co-write with I'll be glad to try and help,I'm sure I could learn alot.I would like to thank you.
    Chris
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  • From ANON - demonesse on November 02, 2004
    you're right... i liked it. you should write more!
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  • From ANON - Yaoilover S on November 01, 2004
    Wow :holds bloody nose: for a really short ass lemon, that bwas pretty good, sooooooooooooo, is your friend going to do more cool stuff like this again? That would be so cool!^^
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  • From ANON - Midori on October 30, 2004
    This is a very good drabble, I'm glad you posted it. Perhaps with encouragement she'd take a stab at writing a fic, or ficlet hmm?
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  • From ANON - Yum on October 30, 2004
    Hey say your friend she is very good!! It's totaly Awesome, short but AWESOME!!! She must not let herself down like that!!^^
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  • From ANON - dana on October 29, 2004
    OMG!!! T~chan I love it write me more smut!!! ^_~
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