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Reviews for Evolution

By : BeccaAmon
  • From ANON - 546534 on July 07, 2014
    You are now cursed. You must send this on or you will be killed. Tonight at 12:00am, by Bloody Mary. This is no joke. So don't think you can quickly get out of it and delete it now because Bloody Mary will come to you if you do not send this on. She will slit your throat and your wrists and pull your eyeballs out with a fork. And then hang your dead corpse in your bedroom cupboard or put you under your bed. What's your parents going to do when they find you dead? Won't be funny then, will it? Don't think this is a fake and it's all put on to scare you because your wrong, so very wrong. Want to hear of some of the sad, sad people who lost their lives or have been seriously hurt by this email?

    CASE ONE -
    Annalise [Surname Removed] :She got this email. Rubbish she thought. She deleted it. And now, Annalise dead.

    CASE TWO -
    Louise [Surname Removed]: She sent this to only 4 people and when she woke up in the morning her wrists had deep lacerations on each. Luckily there was no pain felt, though she is scarred for life.

    CASE THREE -
    Thomas [Surname Removed]: He sent this to 5 people. Big mistake. The night Thomas was lying in his bed watching T.V. The clock shows '12:01am'. The T.V misteriously flickered off and Thomas's bedroom lamp flashed on and off several times. It went pitch black, Thomas looked to the left of him and there she was, Bloody Mary standing in white rags. Blood everywhere with a knife in her hand then disappeared. The biggest fright of Thomas's life.

    Warning... NEVER look in a mirror and repeat -'Bloody Mary.Bloody Mary.' Bloody Mary... I KILLED YOUR SON' Is it the end for you tonight! YOU ARE NOW CURSED

    We strongly advise you to send this email on. It is seriously NO JOKE. We don't want to see another life wasted. ITS YOUR CHOICE... WANNA DIE TONIGHT? If you send this email to...

    NO PEOPLE - You're going to die.

    1-5 PEOPLE - You're going to either get hurt or get the biggest fright of your life.

    5-15 PEOPLE - You will bring your family bad luck and someone close to you will die.

    15 -25 OR MORE PEOPLE - You are safe from Bloody Mary
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  • From mabidiso on November 10, 2011
    Ridiculously awesome. Memorable and striking and every good thing.
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  • From TheMadKatter13 on October 09, 2008
    Damn, I wish this site allowed you to favourite authors and stories. That was so amazing! It wasn't sad or frustrating, it just was. Although, I am a little curious to see if they are going to remain just friends with benefits, or if they are going to date or what...

    You have got to be one of my favourite authors. And now I'm going to re-read Spiral Falling for the 1oth+ time. Excuse me...
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on September 01, 2007
    yo i know this story is old and you prob dont care anymore (which is why i usually dont review mega old fics) but this story was so amazing i felt you had a right to know just how impressed i was. I actually found myself applauding at the end lol Have only read the first chapter but... wow.. fantastic job
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  • From ANON - Rasengan22 on November 25, 2006
    Damn I still fucking love this oneshot! Everytime I need to be inspired or read one of the best sex scenes ever, I always come back to this. Dammit!
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  • From ANON - RavenSilverKat on August 20, 2006
    hahaha I
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  • From ANON - kyuubigirl on July 26, 2006
    I know I read this before, but after reading so many other stories, I totally agree with what one of the first reviewers said, I think you just are so amazing with male/male interactions. Well, actually you just write so well that everything feels really realistic. It's like instantly you know exactly what's happenening in the scene. I think it's (as always) your attention to the smallest detail, and yet it's so smooth. And I like how you'll have them say something and yet whatever it is goes unheard by the other character. Damn it, why are you so good? I just can't get over how much I think of the way your Naruto and Sasuke interact in all your works. It's just something you can easily think about for days. No, I don't know why I'm talking in the second person. I just always feel such emotion from both of them and between them. It's just beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Innerchild on July 10, 2006
    hm, i want more! please say there is more to this story! it is sooo freaking good.

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  • From ANON - rachi on February 11, 2006
    Oh, that was so cute! =^^= They never made it to the coffee shop? I hope Ino wasn't mad! Great job, my heart is floating. Kawaii! ^^ Anyhow, thank you for writing this, because I loved it so very much! ^oo^

    Great job, hope you write some more!

    rachi
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  • From ANON - Gloomy on December 26, 2005
    Omg...that was awesome...awesome awesome awesome! I've no other words for it. I wouldn't mind reading a story like that over again since it was SO incredibly and wonderfully well-written. I kinda like the AU feel to this and am totally in love with your writing style. The ending to both chapters were just the best! I couldn't stop squealing at their cuteness after reading them. Great job...hope you write more SasuNaru ^^
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  • From ANON - R on September 25, 2005
    PURE GOLD. Homawgawd. That was just *fan fan* dude...it was hot. THE END. You win.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on September 14, 2005
    lol, man i loved this. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Vicki on August 20, 2005
    "We never made it to the coffee shop" Ha! I like it. Not too cliched, I like the sense of realism.(Morning Breath is really a bitch) I like the way you've portrayed the 1st person POV. Only some authors can really nail 1st person POV and I think you're one of them. (Not to mention the way the lemon was hot, even though I find it hard to write like that)
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  • From ANON - Rune on August 02, 2005
    I don't know exactly what to say except that was so freaking hot *dies*
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  • From matsutake on April 25, 2005
    Sasuke is -such- a horny bastard! *grins* He was gorgeous as you portrayed him: wanton and desperate. Naruto’s introspection was just guh… The way he reacted to Sasuke and the changing friendship, amazing. This is absolutely one of the hottest boysmut I’ve ever read. The electricity portrayed between the two of them is delicious and your writing style is envious. I look forward to more great one-shots like this *wide innocent smile*
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