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Reviews for Caged Birds

By : Aneue
  • From ANON - Drake on July 13, 2004
    Wow... Excellent story with great characterization. I love the way you get into Hinata and Neji's heads. I'm not a huge fan of this pairing, but I am a fan of both these characters and you seem to have them spot-on. I'm especially impressed on how you're keeping Neji so in character, and the somewhat erotic nature of the chakra transfer is an excellent rationale for them starting to get more intimate. Kudos on the story... Hope to see more. ;)
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  • From ANON - chl on June 29, 2004
    the formatting and some of the grammar need a major overhaul, but i love the drama. the interaction between the cousins is gripping. the fluctuation of emotions is a nice change from the usual gradual "learning to love" theme that fics like this generally have. this is a very good piece, but again, i stress that you consider re-formatting and rewriting some paragraphs.
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  • From ANON - bored on June 19, 2004
    anta no nihongo warukunai jyan

    fic ga nakanaka omoshiroi da ze
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  • From ANON - noname on June 16, 2004
    oh yeah, and just a little idea to get their little romance started. how about make neji awake in terrible pain one night and hinata walks in to find him like that. she rushes up to him and tries her best to relieve him of his pain by transferring chakra and becomes exhausted. she collapses onto the bed facing neji, asleep whilst neji battles with his emotions. eg. why did she save me? why, when i tried to kill her... blah blah... moon comes out, shines on them... illuminating her face blah blah. you get the idea... so yeah, its just a thought of what you could do... appreciate it if you could upda lia little faster though. ja~
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  • From ANON - noname on June 16, 2004
    hahaha, this is a good story... so the pairing's neji and hinata. interesting. quickly update please and have a little bit more action like say kissing? smooch smooch. hahaha!! i am LOVING this fic!
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  • From ANON - Korahna on June 15, 2004
    Wow this is good, update soon.
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  • From ANON - Cookie6 on June 14, 2004
    Love this fic. It always gets betterh chh chapter. I love that fact that it is longer as well. Please write more.
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  • From ANON - Angie on June 14, 2004
    You update quick. I love this chapter. Neji is finally awake. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Neji Lover on June 13, 2004
    Neji! Hinata! Neji! Hinata! Neji! Get together and be happy you two! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Angie on June 13, 2004
    Great! I hope that you update as quick as you did for this chapter. Will Neji finally be able to move now? Will he like Hinata? Update!
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  • From ANON - Cookie6 on June 13, 2004
    You updated so quickly. I love this chapter. Hinata seems so in charge of Neji. Please write more.
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  • From ANON - Angie on June 12, 2004
    Nice fic. I hope you continue this story.
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  • From ANON - Neji Lover on June 12, 2004
    I hope that Neji will be greatful that Hinata will eventually save his life. Update please.
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  • From ANON - Cookie6 on June 12, 2004
    Great story. I love Neji/Hinata fics. Is this a Neji likes Hinata but Hinata feels uneasy around him kind of fic, or is this a Hinata likes Neji fic ( but I think that this can't be it since she sounded like she hated him). Please update soon! I just love this story.
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  • From ANON - ayonoi on June 12, 2004
    Ahh thank you sooo much for the NejixHinata fic, I am so glad more people are writing the couple more. I really liked the first chapter a lot, it lays down where our Hinata stands in relation to Neji and how interesting getting those two together is going to be. I am looking forward to the rest of your fic. Good luck and I can't wait for the next update.
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