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Reviews for Hindsight's 20/20

By : tealeaf
  • From ANON - Mariam on January 26, 2006
    Holy crap, I always wondered if you were ever going to come back! Woot!

    people like him were coughed up like black blood and spat onto the sidewalk.

    That is a fantastic line. I love the imagery of the blackened lung and all that. Very awesome.
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on January 06, 2006
    Cool. Read/skimmed through the 3 version on your livejournal. B and C are quite similar, yep. Don't know who is Kotetsu and don't really care. Hmm... Sasuke seeing Sakura only as a means to an end upsets me a bit, much like how Itachi is training her for his brother's sake. Must be the romantic in me. In both case, Haruno DISGUSTS me. EEYUCK doesn't cut it. Please tell me he didn't molest/rape little Sakura, or I'd rip his nads out and lock him in a prison with BIG horny brutes for inmates.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 22, 2005
    Hey, I totally love this story!
    Is this a KakaSaku story? I love that pairing!
    Hope you update soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - drum288 on November 03, 2005
    Not gonna lie, I love this story against my own will! I read the first chapter and didn't like the story, but for some reason, I kept reading. And the more I read, the more I wanted to read! Now I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - KAKASHI LOVER on October 30, 2005
    I totally love it! Please please UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kate on September 10, 2005
    Ah! This is so good! I really love how Sakura and Naruto laugh at Shikamaru and Chouji for getting stuck with Ino! Ha! Ha! :)
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on September 08, 2005
    The Itachi-Sakura relationship in the first version makes more continuity sense, as I've always thought their relationship was based on mutual understanding (and sex). The second version completely butchered the image of Itachi I had of him so far in this fic. Granted there's the "monster in his home, human in her home" thing; it still threw my image of their relationship right out the window.

    But the most important thing is... WHEN are you going to stop wimping out on the sex scenes? It's Aff.net! I want my smut dammit! XD
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on September 08, 2005
    I thought this odd before, but thought I'd misread or something, but this time I re-read it, and lo and behold! You said Itachi bit his thumb and dripped his blood onto the sketch, but later when Genma questioned Sakura on the blood, Sakura hid the bandaid on her thumb. So whose blood is it? Both???

    BTW, I really appreciate Leafy Girl for getting you to keep writing this. Here's some of my own: GAMBARE! Keep going! Great Work! Don't stop with the updates!
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on August 06, 2005
    Awesome, dude... Now here's hoping you update regularly. ;)
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  • From ANON - tikimoof on January 24, 2005
    wow.....this is.....amazing. And I'm crazily addicted. And since I'm always really bad at the constructive part of reviews (besides offering to worship the ground you walk on......authors/authoresses all need their ego boosts, right? XD), I'll just ask you to continue whenever you can. Again, wonderful story!
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  • From ANON - kayoko on September 19, 2004
    hm...now i'm even more confused as to sakura's past and everything that happened before...

    man, your chapters are getting longer and longer...

    thanks for the chapter.
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on July 20, 2004
    Can't wait to read about the model! I have a feeling of who you may have in mind. I am curious about Itachi's eye, I hope you go into more detail about that. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - The Sadist on July 15, 2004
    My vote is to go with your new idea. It is different and intriguing, and in my opinion, allows for more character depth, which seems to be your goal for this story. I would not mind re- reading the story, as it is already brilliant, and any re- write to make it better wouldn't be in the least tiresome.
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  • From ANON - anime on July 14, 2004
    well am not going WTF! but i just want to say if you do decided to redo it start a entirely different link for it becasue some times when you revised it mess a really great story up and personal i like how you have it right now it's great and very awesom possumish so all i can really say is keep up the kick ass story and ill read no matter what becasue your a great aurthor who likes sakura and i don't find many of those!r sor sorry for not shutting up just have fun when you write this story and it's good either way!!!=P
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  • From ANON - CrazyJ on July 14, 2004
    I wouldn't mind at all to reread the whole story again with the edits. This is an awesome story and reading it again would be fun. I'm glad your inspired in it now, would really suck if you weren't. Anyways, the idea you have for the plot is a very nice idea! i looks forward to the next chapter!
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