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Reviews for My Immortal

By : SaphireMMTPX
  • From ANON - Yume on November 29, 2006
    it's sasuke in first person. i was torn between it either being sasuke or naruto, then when it was talking about the dead one having blue eyes i realized exactly who it was.
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  • From ANON - suki on October 17, 2005
    This was a very emotional little piece. I'd like to see what you can do with it. I doubt that you will continue it, seeing how it's been so long sinse you wrote it, but I still vote to go for it. A reincarnation fic could be interesting. Then they can have all the hot boy sex they want! =)
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  • From ANON - Dancing_Kitsune on October 17, 2005
    It's from Sasuke's point of view, isn't it? The blue eyes pointed out that it was obviously not Naruto, and I doubt that Sakura was Naruto's rival with every fiber of my being.....heh

    Please continue with this. You could make what happened before and up to Naruto's death, or maybe you could do everyone's reactions to Sasuke's suicide that followed Naruto's death. Or maybe even the both. That'd be very worth reading.

    ~DK
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  • From ANON - Balafeo on July 06, 2005
    It has to be Sasuke's point of view! All the hints are there, sucj as the person he's talking about is always happy. Plus Naruto would give his life for Sasuke, going against his wishes... And Sasuke would be nothing if he lost the person he loved.

    Well that's what i think anyway!

    It's my favorite Evanescence song also!

    Balafeo
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  • From ANON - Mina on April 09, 2005
    I think the first person pov is Sasuke right? I like it, continue if you could.
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  • From ANON - Demon_Fox on December 10, 2004
    I think that it is a Sasuke and Naruto fic and I thought that it was wonderful and I truely wish that you would continue it mabe with track two ont the Evanesence CD this time? Or I could write some dark poetry for you to use, I am a published poet. XP

    I really enjoyed this Fic and it made me cry. T_T So good!!!!! You have some serious talent there. You should use it. XD

    You friend,
    Demon_Fox
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  • From ANON - Crystal on October 11, 2004
    I'm sure that it's sasuke talking about naruto. This was so sad and so good! There are so many clues, but at first I thought it was naruto talking about sasuke. This is unlike anything I've ever read here. If I'm wrong then could you email me and tell me who it was please?! Spellcasterz4eva@yahoo.com I love this even though it was so sad and I hope sasuke finds peace.
    Ja ne,
    Spellcasterz
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  • From ANON - miri on April 22, 2004
    I'm guessing Naruto or Sasuke.. but my money's currently pretty much on Sasuke for the moment. I'd like to know though if I'm right or wrong. It was a very nice piece all together, very well written.
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  • From ANON - Jiro on December 31, 2003

    Awww!!! That wassad!sad!!! And so sweet! And...and... :::finishes lamely::: stuff. Dammit! I'm no good at this giving "praise" thing... so... here ya go ::: hands over a box labeled 'praise'::: Please write more!!!

    P.S. Was it Sasuke? Huh, huh?!?! Where's my bonus?! Where is it?!?! ^__^ Lol, j/k (mostly)

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  • From ANON - Naruke and Shikamaru on December 24, 2003
    Naruke: Oh my god...Naruto's dead, and Sasuke's killing himself? OH MY EFFING GOD!!!
    Shikamaru: *screaming like a dork* AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! IT'S THE APOCOLIPSE!!! SASUKE'S KILLING HIMSELF BECAUSE HE CARES!!!!! OH MY GOD!!!!
    Naruke: *sighs* Now that that's done...So...was it Sasuke that was in first person? Or was it Kakashi? Or someone else entirely?
    Shikamaru: *is horrified* Holy crap! What if it was Orochimaru?!
    Naruke: No, it couldn't have been, cause it said 'you know the bridge where we used to meet and where sensei was always late'? Well, it couldn't have been Orochimaru, cause he's not on Team 7.
    Shikamaru: Heaven forbid.
    Naruke: Yeah! And Sakura's not a guy-
    Shikamaru: She might as well be!
    e!
    Naruke: *sniggers before contiuing* So Sasuke's the only plausible person, because I highly doubt Kakashi would call himself sensei.
    Shikamaru: SO IT IS SASUKE!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! I AM SMART!!!
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  • From ANON - KARINA on December 22, 2003
    .....WOW...........ITS BEAUTIFUL.......REALLY BEAUTIFUL!!!
    And what the hell are you thinking of probably not continuing this story.
    Don't even DARE think about again!!!!
    About the first person's point of view I think is SASUKE!!!
    AM I RIGHT OR WRONG?!? PLEASE LET ME KNOW AT ramirez-f@sbcglobal.net
    Well hope to see the next chapter!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Suzuko on December 16, 2003
    I'm going to say Sasuke was talking about Naruto because they fight all the time and Naruto is really carefree kind uy wuy who actually has the tendency to change moods very quickly but if it isn't then I at least gave it my best shot of and if you do continue this I would really like to read more this is really really really really really gooooooooooooood. Oh and if it isn't them can you tell me who it is. Did I mention how much I really really really liked this story.
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  • From ANON - P1 on December 04, 2003
    It's so sad...
    At the beginning I thought it might have been Naruto talking about Sasuke with the rival deals, but I can't even imagine Sasuke crying to Naruto so then Sasuke talking about Naruto. Naruto has the carefree nature and the blue eyes, in fact from what I can tell he's the only one with blue eyes. So then the whole 'rivals' thing was defnately Sasuke talking about Naruto.
    This story's POV is from Sasuke!

    Am I right, am I right?
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