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Reviews for Melek in Olum

By : samptra
  • From RyuuOokami on April 05, 2008
    Nice story.
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  • From on June 08, 2007
    Wait is the storiy over or did you just run out of ideas? oh well It goes off my fav list on my computer. I guess the stories done and I've read it all so theres no point to come back to read the next chapter huh? oh well, and it was a good story too.
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  • From ANON - mike~ on January 05, 2007
    wah! finally, an update!

    i kinda lost hope in reading this again, but you gave me a great new year's gift, thx! i loved the way naruto defended his village, and now, the village will have to acknowledge naruto for who he is, not what he is... that is, if he survives. although i can still see some villagers doubting him since he had to rely on the demon strength in the end and kinda lost it too... nonetheless, naruto was amazing - the demon that onced reaked havac on the village has now saved it.

    update soon!


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  • From ANON - dana on August 18, 2006
    I really like your interpretation of naruto (as the sexy demi-god of death) and sa-chan (his angel). Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on July 24, 2006
    The ending was sweet, and the whole chapter was great! I liked how you handled Sasuke's reaction to the news about Naruto, awesome job. Update soon, okay?
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  • From ANON - Sonny on July 10, 2006
    Fuck fuck fuck more more more, omg this story is so good, please write more.
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  • From ANON - FirePeleKa on June 04, 2006
    Aren't you missing 2 chapters?
    What happened to Chap 8 (I Can Only Imagine) and Chap 9 (Memories)?

    I really like this story, and I've been following it for a while. I really hope you continue with it.

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  • From ANON - B on June 01, 2006
    loving the story but when are u going to update
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  • From ANON - Kayla on February 07, 2006
    I really like this story, it has a sort of charm to it that just warms you up. A lot of fics tend to be angsty and mean (mean, as in the characters bully each other), but your fic has just the right touch of sadness with the touchy-feely parts in between so it doesn't leave the reader all depressed. Also, it's nice to see a story in which sasuke and naruto arent constantly being twats to eachother and where narutos not a sobbing emo uke.

    I only have one complaint though; your writing, though it's still easy to understand, is a bit choppy in a lot of areas. Like this line for example:

    "Workout cloths?" nodding Naruto gathering some fresh clothing from the closet, "I didn't mean
    to disturb you Sasuke, you need you sleep."

    Would work better as:

    "Workout clothes?"

    Nodding, Naruto gathered some fresh clothing from the closet. "I didn't mean to disturb you Sasuke; you need your sleep."

    Or something like that. But yeah, great fic otherwise. And ouu, we're both from Canada. Nice.
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  • From ANON - silver-eyed on January 31, 2006
    OMG!! This is great! you have got to udate a lot more, life be damned!! just kidding, don't damn your life, but i would like to read so much more!! just to note though, you've got some grammar to work on, and try to use some commas too. otherwise, i'm in heaven when i read this!!
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  • From ANON - AlleyKitten on January 31, 2006
    OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! *pounces* yay!!! i lurves it ^_^ can't wait till there's more... there will be more, won't there? *puppy eyes* please say there'll be more???

    alleykitten
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  • From MichiTheThird on January 29, 2006
    Samptra! Welcome back! I've stalked this fic for many a year and to see such a surprising update! ^_^ And they said NARUTO was the number one ninja of surprises! I can only pray and hope that you won't leave us hanging on chapter ten for too long. This was a wonderful chapter. Their interaction has pacified me much, but the end has me worried. I will continue to stalk this fic, like many others, until the very end! XD We missed you!
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  • From ANON - Lidy on January 29, 2006
    *tears of JOY* It took me FOREVER to find this fic...I remember back when I FIRST read it in ff.net and hardly anyone else was reading it and then, I couldn't find it...but, then my friend said she read it @ mediaminer and I was so happy and then I found it here and an upload and and and T.T I'm just SO HAPPY! Thank you SO much! I've been waiting SO long for an update, you have NO idea...thank you thank you please, please, please update as soon as humanly possible! What a cliffhanger! Sasuke KNOWS! He KNOWS! x.X And they KISSED! ;.; Oh, the happiness and suspense!!!
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  • From ANON - Kiara on January 28, 2006
    Really wonderful plot! I am certainly looking forward to reading the future chapters. So, please update soon. Hmm, can you please tell me where you found the name and what it means? Thanks, cuz it's such an unusual title, it caught my attention and I am just curious.
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  • From ANON - AI QING on January 27, 2006
    I like your story so far. It's really good, but your story contain so many grammar errors. Please correct your grammar. It's hard to read it when you noticed so many grammar errors.
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