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Reviews for Melek in Olum

By : samptra
  • From ANON - ookima on June 02, 2004
    update really soon! I relaly love this and how Naruto's secret and hard life is
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  • From ANON - ranoshi_ai on June 01, 2004
    wow..i seriously thought that this fic had died out quite some while ago. it’s truly great to see that one of the best fics that roam in the Naruto fandom to come back to life rather than thrown to the side of the road of fanfiction leaving its readers crying at such an unsightly deed. thank goodness you continued^___^. I love how you started out the story and had Naruto become one if not the strongest ninja and I really like Sasuke ans Naruto’s friendship. it’s gives time for things to grow. a lemon in the next chapter? well, if you can make it logical and believable, then all power and luck to you from all of us ^^b great job so far, we hope to see more of your work in the future^-^v
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  • From ANON - JadeTiger on June 01, 2004
    *chants*YAOI!! YAOI!! YAOI!! GO GO GO!!!!

    So cute and totally awsome!! More soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - otakugirl (too lazy to sign in) on April 29, 2004
    O_O waaaaaaaaaaahhh!!!!! don't stop there!! please continue, you must, or I'll die of sheer suspence!!! XO

    this fic rocks, update soon please! ^^
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  • From ANON - tess on April 22, 2004
    UPDATE NOW!!! MUST HAVE MOORREEE!!!
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  • From ANON - Anyacatt on April 12, 2004
    .....pleeeeeeeaaaase write more......hehehe I guess I'm not very patcient.......oh well.....wellat least please don't let this fanfic die! Gods I hope not..... that would suck. Due to lack of insperation I'll stop but great job and I love your fic. ~Cat
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  • From ANON - tessia on April 04, 2004
    huh? what? why!? nooooo! naruto musnt kill them! noooooo! *crying softly* he cant. ill never forgive you if sasuke dies. oh and make a sex scene already.
    p.s. koodos on your outstanding plot me likes ^.^
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  • From ANON - SexySiriusBlack on April 03, 2004
    It's definitely....not defiantly...I can't tell you how many people make this same mistake...it just bugs me that so many people do. Your story is my favorite, though...so...since it is...I wish you would update quicker...hint,hint!
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  • From ANON - kayoko on March 11, 2004
    hm......what exactly does the title mean...?
    *loves the story very muchies*
    *that was naruto at the end of the chapter, right? so...he was swinging his blade....? *a little confused*...maybe i should read it a few more times
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  • From on March 11, 2004
    Ohhh... I can't wait for the next chapter! I love the characterization in this.
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  • From ANON - katie on March 10, 2004
    wow, i love this story. please fininsh this!
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  • From ANON - huzzah_ukelele on March 07, 2004
    woo! this is a really good fic! keep going!
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  • From ANON - Teki on March 06, 2004
    Awesome, awesome, awesomeotheother great chapter. ^o^ I love this series! *squeals* The only improvement I can think of is maybe checking over your work before posting. ^_~ I believe you meant, "definitely" where you put, "defiantly". ^^; But other than a few grammatical errors, awesome! I can't wait for chapter five! ^_~ Continue soon, if you can.
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  • From ANON - Sara on March 04, 2004
    I LOVE IT! can't wait for the next chapter which I hope will be soon! I want to find out what happened to make Naruto like that I have to know!
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  • From Iori on March 03, 2004
    Yeah can can't believe I forgot to review last time. I loved the whole teacher bit. I can just imagine Sasuke with a buncha little girls hanging off of him. Anyway, I kinda feel bad for him now. Poor guy. Hurry up and post the next chapter. I'm dying here. *Imagines your yummy Naru* (drool)
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