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Reviews for Melek in Olum

By : samptra
  • From ANON - Iruka no Koibito on November 04, 2004
    I've been reading this fic for awhile. It's great that Naruto is taller than sasuke for once! And my favorite part of this chapter is theuse use why naruto doesn't wear shoes (I just hope he doesn't step in anything nasty barefoot). ^_^
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  • From Fyra on November 04, 2004
    Great story... Update soon! Im looking forward to it!
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  • From ANON - Meep on November 03, 2004
    one thought that one would never get the chance of reading a new chapter of this story, as it is old and has not updated for ages
    =3
    luckily one was wrong
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  • From ANON - Spectre on November 03, 2004
    :3 You continued~! Yay! ^^ ^^ ^^.
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  • From ANON - emiko on November 03, 2004
    I've been waiting SOOOO long for this! Finally the next chapter is up!!! I simply adore this story. It's so unusuo reo read a story where Naruto actually is living up to his potential. Keep writing this excellent story!
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  • From ANON - Jena on November 03, 2004
    Glad you're back! Aside from the few spelling errors, I enjoyed it immensely. Next chapter please!!!
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  • From ANON - The Schiz is too lazy to log in on November 03, 2004
    Ch. 7 review. OMG I rememthisthis fic. I read it here and on FFN as Minerva. I've missed it so. So glad you updated. Yum, I can't wait for the SasuNaru or NaruSasu jazz.
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  • From ANON - sdw on November 03, 2004
    I like where you're going with this - your writing style has potential. However, the grammar and spelling really does it in for me. Naruto's last name is "Uzumaki" not "Uzamaki". Also, "where" was put in instead of "were" as well as other spelling errors like "barley" (the stuff you eat) versus "barley". I hate to be a nitpick, but I must be honest and say that those minor details do take away from someone's writing. Also, quite a bit of dialogue/thoughts are out of character so that I can't even ima the them coming from Naruto or Sasuke. That might be something you could consider working on.
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  • From ANON - Edward on September 18, 2004
    Please....please....please...write more. I read the start of this fic awhile back. I like what you've added, but i really really want to read the hook up part! And thanks for giving the lee and sakura pairing some play. I heart lee. And his eyebrows...sorta.

    Edd
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  • From ANON - Frizzball on August 23, 2004
    man, this story so totally rocks! Nemo moment over, i love your story! i love the way youv'e made Naruto so tall and strong and ...manly and saskue so gracefull and feeling! dont stop, i was a little worried when everyone said you didn't update this for yonks so please dont do that now!
    you happy and faithfull reader
    Frizzball
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  • From ANON - Fayweir on August 11, 2004
    ADD MORE TO THE STORY, ITS SOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've been waiting for an update for a really long time. i wanna read more *CRY*
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  • From ANON - phicklampa on June 09, 2004
    I love this series! Really great and I can't wait till the next chapter... please hurry!
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  • From ANON - xXKaskading_DarknessXx on June 08, 2004
    I really this fic, I like how you made Naurto tall and all, especially in those assasination clothes *thumbs up* really nice ^_~* Hehe, I LOVE the couple NaruSasu, I absolutely love it ^~^ Please update soon, I'll be reading ^_^ *waves*
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  • From ANON - Silver on June 04, 2004
    OMFG SHE UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!! -dies again- ok, sorry, HAD to do that. but omg, thank you!!! please write more!! you have sucha rich writing style and a really LIKE(hinthint) it. a LOT. m
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  • From ANON - tess on June 02, 2004
    oh yes finally! fucking finally i was waiting for you to update this! ahhhh! oh and i thought this chapter did not suck, evrey chapter needs fillers and plot things to make the story flow, its whats expected with every great writer
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