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Reviews for Melek in Olum

By : samptra
  • From ANON - Rachel Dracon on February 09, 2005
    This is great, I especially love the badass image of Naruto decked out to kill. I know it's supposed to be a horrible thing an' all, but it still kicks ass. And you've managed to make Sasuke love him from afar without turning into a completely lovesick THING. Awesome story, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Fan on February 09, 2005
    totally beautifull !!!! CUTE!!!! to cute for words *gives you cookies* man uke sasuke is the best!!! YAY HE EVEN GOT A PLUSHIE!!!! waiiiii!!!! Cute!!!! please write more!!!!ilove you

    ^---^ your # 1 Fan
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  • From ANON - koolanimefreek on February 09, 2005
    Sweet sweet story!!! even though naruto is a major killer he is so sweet!!! the third shouldn't have make naruto into that man, melek in olum.... anyways, naruto and sasuke are sooo in love with each other and they don't even know that the other feels the same *whimpers* sooo sad.... the song was sooo sweet too who would have imagined that naruto would be like this??? he can sing, is super intelligent, sweet, thoughtful, and lots and lots more..... *sighs dreamily* what i find the more amusing is that naruto is soooo tall!!! almost 7' *squeals* GREAT STORY!!! cant wait for next chappy!!! update soon ^o^
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  • From Ghostninja85 on February 09, 2005
    AHHHHHHH! I thought you had updated. Oh well. I'm going to read it all over again.

    Update soon! I'm dying for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Ezj on February 08, 2005
    X.X *dies from reading a to good fic*
    YAY an update on this super duper really awsome goody fic...
    I just love your way of writing and the story in itself just marvelous...
    I'm going to live on happy feelings from this fic until the next chapter... =^_^=
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2005
    this is great
    i can't wait for you to update
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2005
    this is great
    i can't wait for you to update
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  • From ANON - sparkle on January 05, 2005
    I absolutely love your story. It has such a good story and plot development, it is soooo interesting. I usually don't review, but this story really caught my attention and made me disappointed that it wasn't finished. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - answers on December 30, 2004
    PPPPPPLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEE update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    And when you do, can we move sasukes and narutos relationship along just a little faster?Please? i love your naruto And sasuke! i want to kidnap them and keep them all to myself forever! i will if you dont update!

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  • From ANON - Answers on December 27, 2004
    please please please update soon! i love this story and it so ard to find a hot, dominate naruto written so well! please update for my sainity!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2004
    plz update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Demon_Fox on December 07, 2004
    I will HURT YOU if you do not update this fic!!!!!!!! LOL!!!XD Kidding!

    I want to read the next chapter of this fic so very badly so please, please, pretty please update???? X3


    I would be glad to proof read your fics for you if you still need a Beta or an editior. I am good with grammer so I would have no ploblems with that.

    You are a fabulous nwriter and you should be very proud of yourself!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter of this wonderful fic!!!!!


    Sincerely yours,
    X3
    Demon_Fox
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  • From ANON - Hawk on November 17, 2004
    Why don't you update? this is the best Naruto fic I've read yet!

    ~Hawk
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  • From ANON - Toki Mirage on November 09, 2004
    *jaw drop* okay now, you absolutely HAVE to change that horrible summary!! this story rules, and i would have freakin skipped over it had i not been bored!! So tell us what this story is actually about in the summary! it will draw eyes!! ^^ n e way, i HATE the fact that you can't have author alert on this site... it would be SO convienient... n e way, if you find the time, i would greatly appriciate it if you could inform of the next update. ^^ Your story was a very pleasurable read. Good job! Update soon! ^_-
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  • From ANON - w00tw00tw00ty on November 08, 2004
    woot woot! i'm so glad you updated! I've been waiting FOREVER! woot ok sorry, I'm just super excited, and by the way, i didn't think this chapter sucked! this chapter was more of a ... breather in the story ... ::nods head:: yup, yup! anyways, please update soon! i love your story!
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