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Reviews for Melek in Olum

By : samptra
  • From ANON - Leasan on August 25, 2005
    When will you update???
    I hope you didn't abandon this fic, it's so lovely!!!!!
    Please, try to find some time to write!!!!!
    I really love it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 17, 2005
    No lemony goodness.Why have this as an adult rating?
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  • From ANON - Agacissko on July 13, 2005
    eww...what a fluff..:P i enjoyed your fic until the teddy bear appeared in sasuke thoughts...man, hes a guy, a shinobi for god sake XD in your fic he acts like some pussy..even sakura isnt so "omg!!! teddy bear i love u" oh, and he must be really dumb if he didnt linked naruto with "him" especially after so many hints: shuriken, blue eyes, naruto almost killing messeneger :/ i bet he'll find narutos sword in following chapteraz and he would wonder why "he" keeps his weapon in narutos apatment..oh man i though ke was kinda smart :D da biggest OOC ive ever read lol... idiot Sasuke dreams about geting all the plushies in the world..ugh i see a barbie, or no! i see a ken..i radher dont wanna know what happpen next..u killed me with this plushie idea..anyway i can kinda (only) imagine (lalala) how this fic is gonna end up :/ "oh naruto i luv yaa! -me toooo!! -lets make sweetswteet love!!blablabla"
    yea, sorry for nasty review, noone is perfect so m i but regardles major occnes i liked the naruto-hero idea :D finnaly something new! oh, and i like your style :D sometimes u missed keyboard butons and i read the line, than I haf to read it twice XD but ussually it worked heheh. it would be really great if u wrote more stuff like in chapters 1-6 or so :) yea ^^
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  • From ANON - Aniko on July 11, 2005
    ...that's it?
    THAT'S IT?!
    I WAS SO DAMN DRAWN INTO THIS FIC AND YOU ENDED IT! YOU!
    yooooooouuuuuuuuu........ =.=
    continue...CONTINUE I SAY! ROARS!
    i want more naruxsasu action YEAH! >=)
    your story rocks...do not EVER discontinue it...=.=
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  • From ANON - Naii on July 02, 2005
    Get on with the story already ! its good but it pisses every one of when a wrighter stopes in full swing of the story an d not say so or do a continuation. please update ASAP.
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  • From Mint on June 23, 2005
    Aaaahhh ;_; It's so hard to find a good fanfic with an uke-sasuke. And you write ever so lovely as well, so... if you didn't notice, I'm really sad that you haven't updated in a while.

    Anyways, I hope you do, 'cause... hm, I'll sell you my soul XD.
    Please and thank you - tah!

    Mint.
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  • From on May 10, 2005
    This story is just too good, so please....for the sake of my sanity, continue.
    You've put so many wonderful images in my head, im itching to do fanart. I swear.

    Er... yeah.

    Incredible story, i cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Zassmy on April 09, 2005
    Where did you come up with the name Melek in Olum? In Turkish Melek means angel and olum means death. I must admit that's why I read your story, which is awesome by the way!
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  • From ANON - Inazuma Ookami on March 26, 2005
    Great fic! The thing is... the paragraphs got a little messed up and it's now difficult to read. I'd hate to see such a great fic get less hits because of something like that. You really should fix it. *nudge*
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  • From on March 16, 2005
    ^__^ i like it!!! I especially love how you've dipicted the older Naruto. And Saskue is so cute, i can't wait for them to get together!

    please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Mayzen on March 13, 2005
    If there is a blank one of these from me sorry about the accidently pressed the enter button ^.^;. Great chappy you have. I love Naruto being so protetive of Sasuke. I have a new ficcy out. it's called 'home at last' check it out if you haven't already thanky for reading this and writing this ficcy. later
    ~Mayzen
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  • From ANON - lillilly on March 13, 2005
    I love this story!!!! Can you pleasw update a little sooner? And could we please get some loving going on here, i love angst just as much as the next person but can you please give us a little something to hold onto?? Please *puppy dog eyes*.
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on March 13, 2005
    Yay an update. Yay it is awesome. YaY! Keep up the awesome work. coolsa.
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  • From ANON - Demon on March 13, 2005
    i love this fic and can't wait to see if Sasuke and Naruto ever figure out how the other feels.
    your a great writer and i love your story it's amazing and i can see so many ways this can go. I love this and you better update soon!

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  • From ANON - EviL-Duckie on March 12, 2005
    This is undoubtedly one of my favorite stories of all time.
    Albeit there are a few spelling mistakes, its still extremely well written and deserves every single great comment you receive.

    Keep up the good work and I'll be checking back for the next chapter! =]



    PS. I want that bear that Naru-chan got Sasuke! XD
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