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Reviews for Melek in Olum

By : samptra
  • From ANON - DevilLived on January 27, 2006
    GAH! This story is awesome. Unique plot, it rocks! What's gonn happen now that Sasuke found Melek in Olum's clothes? Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Monkey Lady on January 27, 2006
    Yeeeeaaaahhhh! I'd given up hope this would continue! Oh I'm sooooo happy! I like that Sasuke jsut found out about Naruto's real occupation. Should make the next chapter interesting! I like your style and the suspense you are building. Geez, I'm 25 and giggling like a preteen. Haha. Love the work. Can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - natty on January 26, 2006
    noooooooo.....Why did you stop it here great story by the way
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  • From ANON - RyuichiSakuma2 on January 26, 2006
    It's good. ^^
    I want to read more. Now. :D

    -Ryu
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  • From ANON - looli on January 26, 2006
    Ohh you gonna have to update soon hun that was just too adorable
    and believe me I was jumping on the bed when Sasuke was going through Naru's stuff that when I read the word TBC... I didn’t believe and I kept on pushing the button down until it almost broke
    girl you can’t get me all riled up and then lave me hanging like that:(
    so I guess what I’m trying to say is
    PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE
    Love ^_^
    Looli

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  • From ANON - Mayzen on January 26, 2006
    YAY you updated I've been waiting so long ^.^ great chapter finally some Naruto and Sasuke action! I love it well I'll ttyl bai!
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  • From Sheli on January 26, 2006
    Yay you updated. I almost gave up hope. Welcome back. I was wondering when someone would find out who he was and what happened to Naruto. I suppose he'll either run off or be sworn to secrecy now? Or will Sasuke be jealous that the so-called Chuunin is the legend? Here's some chocolate for the update (trying to see if bribery will work to get you to update soon :D)
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  • From ANON - Cat on January 11, 2006
    I have been waiting on this fic forever. I love it enough to wait this long but PLEASE hurry with the mext update. I love you. I love this fic. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more. =^_^=
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  • From ANON - A fan on January 09, 2006
    I love this fic. Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - TeaLeavesGreen on December 28, 2005
    okay, I take that back. I started the next chapter, and couldn't plow through the "jouinin," the "defiantly enough," the occasional lack of punctuation and weirdly truncated words. Seriously, if you got a beta, used spell-check and grammar-check, and brought Naruto's height down a foot or so, I'd totally dig this story, but as it is I simply cannot. I don't want to sound harsh, but you need some constructive criticism.
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  • From ANON - TeaLeavesGreen on December 28, 2005
    umm... interesting fic thus far, though obviously pre-godaime. Potentially awesome plot -- I will continue reading until the end, at least.

    A couple problems, though. Occasionally, perhaps due to formatting, words get truncated, or are just unidentifiable. Also, you seem to have issues with your i's and your ai's. A kuni is a country. A kunai is a weapon. Similarly, nasi is a weird romanization of nashi, which is either an asian pear or the classical negative (nai used to be nashi, and still is on forms and such.) Nasai is an honorific chunk that attaches to gomen in formal situations, usually with a person in your out-group (me-ue) or someone who ranks above you. If you're going to use gratuitous Japanese, at the very least use it correctly. The use of "kunai" was valid, but using the Japanese for "sorry" when we have a perfectly viable English equivalent that carries the exact same connotations is just annoying.
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  • From ANON - mike~ on December 07, 2005
    this is a really cool fic! i wonder when sasuke will finally find out naruto's secret identity? i can't wait! update soon!
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  • From ANON - pyro on November 27, 2005
    this is a good story. Please tell me you are not ending it like this!!! Update soon! for the sake of your fans update soon!!
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  • From ANON - stephanie on October 25, 2005
    If u do not write another chapter soon im goin to hunt u down thru cyberspace this story is totally awsome i think u imagination is fantastic andtaht u really really need to write another chapter before i go insane wonderin what is gonna happen
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  • From ANON - acerbus-chan on October 10, 2005
    i honestly exclaim that this is the best sasunaru fanfic i have ever read. it's so good because you made naruto seem cool and powerful even if he likes sasuke. the suspense and the unrevealed attraction between sasuke and naruto makes this story a even more compelling read. i'm begging you to update and not drop this story since it's just so good...can't wait till you update!
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