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By : gelfling
  • From ANON - Robofetus0 on January 22, 2004
    I can't honestly say that I've enjoyed reading this, but I have to acknowledge it as probably the most skillfully-written Naruto fic I've ever seen. Wonderful job.
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  • From ANON - skittles fairy on January 21, 2004
    Love it. I simply love this. I love how you do Gaara's personality to. Please get another chapter up real soon!
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  • From ANON - Charcoal Aquamarine on January 19, 2004
    Wai, I very muchly like chapter 8. >.> *sits and grins, hugging Gaara plushie* Three chapters at once. Spiffy!! Good work. ^_^ I wuv this fic.
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  • From ANON - Charcoal_Aquamarine on January 14, 2004
    ...Gaara naked...-_- mmmmmmmmmmm.
    Oh yes, you going to write more?? You should. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Allison on December 21, 2003
    Woow. You know, this is the best Naruto fanfiction I have ever read. And that doesn't even begin to describe teh greatness of your writing.
    eel eel so sorry for Gaara. I love Gaara. I love Naruto. I hate Sasuke. :)
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  • From ANON - jazzy on October 29, 2003
    Wooww! this is one seriously dark strange twisted beautiful fic, It's freaking scary!
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  • From ANON - Bronze Eagle on September 28, 2003
    Ah, thankies for the heads up. I didn't think there was much different about the chapter on FFN. ^^;;; |Eagle-chan is an idiot.| Well ... not much I can say to that, is there? Eheh ... ^^; Yes, I liked the ending for this very much. >3 Bwahaha. It was a little confusing who was doing what (at least at first), but I'm sure it was supposed to be that way. I really love your writing style, gelfling-san. It's very abstract, I guess is the word I want, but it gets the feeling of things across very clearly. ^^ I applaud this very wonderful addition to the SasuNaru section of the Naruto fandom!! Jaa ne!
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  • From ANON - felisdeityus on September 27, 2003
    WAI~

    When did you put this up....umm, I mean (duh) god I didn't even CLICK that you'd written another part to two. Sorry, I've been out of sorts lately....Don't get stuff good, jah know?

    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! You did this for me? You did this for ME??!! I swear, this is the best present I ever got (yes I'm calling it my present - nyah nyah to everyone else, Gelfling is mine for the glomping! ;)
    And....whoa....as always your reign over the metaphorical descriptive world amazes me. Halfway through I had to leave the room and go for a quick walk! This is just the way slash should be - no fluffiness, no buying each other chocolates and batting bishounen eyelashes at each other...SEX! Sex sex sex sex! Raw, uncensored, carnal, gutteral glory. Need, want, desire, huffing, puffing, licking, biting, cumming - it's all there, and it's so good. And what's even better is that it's with the two young boys we've grown to love so much who have matured in ways only the most fucked up, tortured children can - too fast, too hazy. Their pasts being only a checkerboard of events, a patchwork of happenings - threadbare of love.
    You use you language, not the characters actions to tone it down a little, make it even more readable - which, in my opinion is a fantastic trick. We don't have cutesy, sugarplum Naruto giggling in a preppie-like manner as he shyly pecks handsome, ken doll Sasukes cheek while a large red censored sign covers the place where WE know he's really fiddling between Sasuke's legs. No. We have lines like:

    "Sasuke started coversing in broken inflanglangauge of gasps and grunts and groans, swearing loudly in his mind and squirming like an infant or newborn kitten in his lap begging to be fed begging for attentiwhimwhimpering loud and moaning hard when Naruto brushed his lips against the side of it, not even kissing it and rubbed his cheekbone in strangled strokes becuase Sasuke was pushing his head down hard and it was a lot of work to keep the jerk from getting his way again."

    Oh yes, call him a jerk, Naruto....Do it again!

    Broken infant language - wonderful!


    To keep us going. Still lusty, still almost porn but with a sensitive, educated, graceful throw that entwines the bridge between 'making wuv' and 'fucking'.
    I'm SO impressed.

    And my icecream has melted. Although, with the imagery, it'll be much more fun to eat....

    SORRY!!! I'll go away now....(I joke I joke)
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  • From on September 25, 2003
    Oh, and why does it sound like Sasuke is getting Incepted?
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  • From on September 25, 2003
    Ugh. I've so been waiting for a more Gaara-centric chapter. But I have to wonder...chapter 6 was short from the version on ff.net...oh, I'll have to check it against the chapter 7 I so didn't see on ff.net. I love this story so much that I read it twice, just to see the differences. I have to say, I find your style of writing very comforting and almost more logical that traditional style writing. It's much easier to figure out what the character is feeling, and the feeling is just that much more intense. Some instances, it's a little hard to plsnipsnippets into context of the story, and I can't tell if its a memory, actually happening, or what, but that's about the only problem I can see with it.
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  • From Shisou on September 25, 2003
    The way Naruto and Gaara interact in this fic.. *purr* It's just too wonderful for words. I love both Naruto/Sasuke and Naruto/Gaara pairings. I'm addicted to your writing.
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  • From ANON - monophobia on September 24, 2003
    [jumps happily] update update update! ^__^;;
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  • From ANON - cneko on September 23, 2003
    Okay...so it's dark. And twisted. And mildly distrubing in parts. And I normally stay far far away from all those things in a fic, but...well, damnit, I adore this fic. I love the way you portray the characters, you really seem to get into their heads. Which is good thing. I have to say that for fic that take such a turn from the cannon, the characterization is excellent. I will admit I do get confused over things now and again. Particularlly the entire bit with Gaara and Sasuke breaking out of prison, and I find I have to go back and re-read parts to understand them. However, overall this is a wonderful fic which I throughly enjoy and look forward to more of it.

    And if this is coming from the queen of fluffy bunny and happy endings land about a dark fic, then you know you've got a damned good piece of writing on your hands. ^_^


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  • From ANON - Naruke & Shikamaru on September 13, 2003
    Naruke: wow...thats good...
    Shikamaru: very confusing...but then again, aood ood stories are confusing! :P
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  • From ANON - LF on September 13, 2003
    ... that was.. really.. good.

    *faint*
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