Reviews for Uzumaki Lust DriveBy : YamiWriter |
You ever gonna continue this fic...at all?
is this ever going to be updated it was realy good
Please update this story. Ignore the flames. people should have already realised that NaruKusi is going to happen anyway.
Ignore the flamers. I mean, in the end, Naruto will bang Kushina, who will dominate the MILFs and bitches he banged. That's a win-win.
So... did the Flames from the ofher site scare you off of continuing this story?
There's a clear double standard in the Naruto fandom where it's fine and perfectly acceptable for Naruto to fuck around and sleep with his friends' mothers but Kami help you if Kushina decides to have sex with someone OTHER THAN her own son - then it's time to get out the torches and pitchforks.
You can never please everyone and, in the end, your most important critic is yourself. You're the one putting all the time and effort into writing the story. Write what you enjoy and what makes you happy.
This was a really good chapter, and how Kushina was fantasizing about Naruto while she was with the Daimyo was great. Looking forward to more!
You don't need to defend yourself for writing a slutty Kushina. You'll notice the people who flame will do so with every chapter you release, because they're reading them all.
Slutty Kushina is hot. Slutty dominant Kushina even moreso.
Still, I think this chapter could do without the scene of Kushian getting angry about Hiruzen supposedly ordering her to 'whore' herself out, especially with how easily she did it anyway. Maybe even have him imply spycraft or something to blackmail him with, but have Naruto's line of 'get home asap' ring in her head and she says 'screw it. Easy way it is.' etc
It'll read better that way imo.
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