Reviews for Secrets of the Namikaze householdBy : just_user |
Just a shame that this nevere got an update for how many years now?
How goes the next chapter for this story? would be very interested to see where this goes from here
Hope that you could continue please. I like it. If Kushina ever got pregnant. I recommend a daughter named miina or ayumi
you know when itachi and said "Why didn't you tell her Minato tried to get into your panties after the failed coup?" i almot think that he was gona showe his hand in his mother pantie
Enjoying the story so far
I think Minato should have a femdom partner as the way you've done Kushina makes her appear as more of a submissive, so i think either Mei or Anko would be a good fit. Before the end of this chapter I would have said it could be Tsume as well but with what Kiba just pulled i hope you have Naruto and Kushina dominate her in front of a tied up Kiba, maybe through Hana into the mix too. Wouldn't mind seeing Minato being pegged by his girl as another reason that he strayed from Kushina but that's just a personal preference
Defiantly looking forward to the next chapter
Kiba stupid flea had to appear, he dares to blackmail Naruto ... "this Naruto" who does not beat around the bush to get what he wants ... Kushina.
What I would like is for him to die or to be blackmailed under a genjutsu thinking that he has relations with Kushina but in reality it is with a man ... what humiliation, right? whoever thinks he is an alpha is a yaoi.
For Minato's partner I was thinking about Yugao ... but since he is not maybe with Anko, maybe that's also why Naruto was encouraged to possess Kushina.
And what to say ... more of Kushina slut
Nice chapter and choice of person to finally stumble onto the secret. I'll be curious how Naruto deals with this. Personally I like the trade a secret for a secret tact, even if he has to create one some how. Or go after his family which makes Hana insteresting ... although not for Minato, because honestly his neglect has been going on so long it's clear he has had someone for a long time so unless he was diddling little Hana befor she came of age ... well I guess her age is up to you, but I think she was only three years younger older than Naruto as she's actually younger than Kurenai and Anko I think. My choice is multiple, because the whole village would have wanted him had he lived to get bored with having the hot and beautiful Kushina. He would probably has his own side harem with a few select civilians but probably a number of wannabe kunoichi. That wouldn't exclude Tsume or Anko imo
Good chapter bro
Love the story. Hope for more.
I would say Minato cheats on kushina with anko or Hana because both would be kinky and wilder in sex and younger than kushina
Ask for you, do you know Spanish to be able to comment like this.
What to do with Minato .... Maybe also a gennin lover, Ino maybe, that's maybe a reason why she stopped having sex with a total Milf like Kushina.
What about Raimaru ... with a single chapter is fine, maybe in a chapter from Kushina's point of view, her adventure, her wedding with Naruto but after a few chapters, since I came to see pure NaruKushi.
Kushina with Naruto what I'm waiting for, an orgy with the clones ... first it would be a KushiNaruKushi (c) and then a NaruKushiNaru (c). If you don't want to do the clones, maybe the dick clone jutsu would fuck her pussy and ass at the same time.
By the way, what a good jutsu Orochimaru taught him with the lenga, I really enjoy Kushina and Naruto continues to squirt much harder until he urinates afterwards and fucking her ass ...
You could definitely use a proofreader, but I like the direction this is going so far. I like that you focus on the mother and son aspect as well, even if the japanese titles are a little offputting.
When it comes to inspiration, stop annoying Sensei! so don't worry, I spoke to LordOfLust once when someone threw out the whole story and wrote it was no big deal. There have been several adoption attempts on this site but they have been unsuccessful, the authors wrote that LoL wrote that authors are free to adopt and be inspired by his work. Just add in the Disclaimer that you drew inspiration from his story.
Hope to see a few Raimaru and Kushina flashbacks to add some depth to the story, if you know what I mean (wink). I'm not saying there should be a lot of it, but how it started, a few scenes in between, such as the award for qualifying to the third stage, or the award for training and missions, sex scene and how it ended. Trust me, it will add depth to the story.
I would forget the most important one apart from the obvious beta need, really interesting and absorbing. I recommend grammarly.com for text checking until you find beta. I would like to help but English also is not my first language.
You need to re-write this or have someone beta test it. The english and sentences don't make much sense, other then that it's a good story
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