Reviews for An Enigmatic AffairBy : MilfHunter |
Come on, Hentaijoy, just look back at your comments, you clearly wanted Minato and Kushina to be in an open relationship which would literally ruin the story like I already explained. Suit yourself, if you're gonna stick around just know that it ain't gonna be like that nor will the "compensation" or divorce happen for quite a while lol. There's still a LOT of naughty progression to be made by the time that happens, or even if it happens. It's not our story, we can only advise the author. Most likely by the time for a an actual divorce comes around, Kushina is gonna be so sexually depraved and busy with Sasuke (and maybe others) that she won't even care, it will be a non issue. Also a divorce doesn't necessarily mean she's cutting off all contact with her family and Mikoto. I strongly support the idea of Mikoto knowing and supporting their relationship, a divorce takes a while to finalize too, by that point Kushina will likely be fucking Sasuke in her master bedroom with no care for who hears or watches lol. If you're gonna stick around just buckle up, cuz there's a lot more coming before this story is anywhere near the divorce point (if it happens) and even then there's still a lot that can happen to continue it. Stop being such a Minato fanboy, this is a smut story for Christs sake, it's centered around Sasuke and Kushina for a reason and it should stay that way.
Dude, that's what the compensating means, he finds peace and moves on, essentially bringing forth Kushina's fears, the divorce and everything. That's the compensation that I am referring to, it's never said that he's not good at sex, she has sex with him, when he's into it at the moment. Also that open ended thing is a different story entirely, it does not connect, also you claim that a gangbang is uninteresting and boring, yet, you say how Sasuke should pawn off Kushina to others later on, that would be uninteresting and boring as you put it. So compensating Minato does not ruin the thrill of the story, I am referring to the ending because he would eventually find out, hence he and Naruto move on without Kushina in their lives. She will also have to move on without them in her life, she would already understand her bond with Minato is gone, hence the divorce, her bond with Naruto will likely be fractured, same with his friendship with Sasuke. Mikoto and Kushina's friendship would be probably be fractured, but she will have to tolerate the relationship in the end. I'm talking of the aftermath, not the now, when I say compensate.
Bro, Hentaijoy, the name of the story is "An Enigmatic AFFAIR" an AFFAIR involves cheating and that's what makes it so hot. Having Minato "compensated" or putting them in an open world where most ppl have an open relationship means NOTHING. It would literally just be mindless sex, that's so boring and uninteresting. You can't have incremental increases in debauchery with open sex, after a ganbang scene or orgy what is there left to write? There has to be stakes, consequences, winners, and losers. The entire thrill of this story is that Sasuke and Kushina are in a taboo cheating relationship, making it so that Minato is going around fucking other ppl as well ruins all that. Also it's not like he's a complete cuck, he's just boring and not good at sex or giving his wife attention, maybe far down the road he can find peace and move on with someone else but "compensating" him ruins the thrill of the story. What makes this story so elite was the god tier buildup and realism of the start of the affair and then the period of them having an "arrangement." That's what makes it so good is that Kushina isn't a slut for no reason, it's a very good natural progression. It's now at the point where Kushina considers Sasuke her boyfriend and so she's doing all these things for him, not cuz she's a complete slut (at least not yet) she does it because she likes the reactions it gets from Sasuke and she knows that he likes it too. Bottom line, open ended platonic sex is boring, this story is about having an affair and so it involves cheating and that's what we like to see cuz there's progression involved and you can always up the ante with how much of a slut she becomes. You're asking for a completely different story and this ain't it my dude, sorry but Minato and Naruto gotta take the L on this one.
You also say that it doesn't mean it's worth, then yours shouldn't mean it's worth either. I never said that Kushina goes back to Minato, did I? No. You say there's plenty of healthy relationship of Minato and Kushina stories, not on this platform. I'm not even bagging on the author, I simply said that Minato should be compensated himself, don't know how that translates to Kushina going back to Minato. I can agree, yes, we don't know the extent of Mikoto and Fugaku's marriage, but based on her attitude with Sasuke being involved with a married woman, she doesn't sound like she approves, considering how Sasuke feigned anger, after his "talk" with Kushina. However, her making Kushina have that talk, shows she's probably doesn't have a boy toy because she would look like a hypocrite.
And before you go off, I agree with BitterNTR's statement, FF.net is saturated with Naruto fucking all the women, but elsewhere, it's Sasuke or Raikage and those stories run the same formula. Frankly, I'm more about open ended relationships, for example, the women can be whores, but the guys don't care because it's expected. Like a smutty world of Naruto, don't think it's ever been done, if so, someone post me a link. For example, in this world, Minato has sex with others like Kushina does, but thry are respectful, say Minato and Kushina are "together" because of Naruto, but they don't have sex with their lovers in the same room, when they're trying to sleep or something, so Minato comes home with say Tsunade, Kushina may be resting from her own fuck marathon, so he fucks Tsunade in another room, unless Kushina is fucking someone, then foursome ensues or at least they don't the other couple fucking in the same room as them. Sex is so open that it's not much of an issue, it would still have the cheating trope because couples are "legally" together because of the pregnancies to form Naruto's generation and Naruto's generation forms Boruto's generation, but it's all open ended, stuff like tha
Sure everyone's got their opinion, Hentaijoy, but doesn't mean it's worth considering especially in a story like this. This story is FAR past the point of Kushina going back to Minato lol, nor would that make much sense. You're taking a smut fanfic WAY TOO seriously lol. It's clearly not your cup of tea nor is it heading in that direction so just let the author do what he does best and continue the debauchery. There's plenty of healthy relationship fics involving Kushina and Minato so go read those, let us have our fun without bagging on the author with unproductive reviews. Also it's never exactly been confirmed that Mikoto is faithful to Fugaku lol, for all we know she could have a no-name boytoy on the side too and just wants her best friend to be sexually satisfied no matter who it is. She and Fugaku could be in a sort of open marriage or maybe she's just a huge pervert in her own right, plenty of ways to make it so that she's ok with her son and best friend being together. If you got nothing positive to add or critique without completely changing the nature of this story then please just read something else, thank you!
Everyone's entitled to their own opinion, Buffalo. There is also little to none "vanilla" stories, as you put it, involving Minato. I also don't think you were readijg, but it seems stupid for Mikoto to endorse the relationship, otherwise, she wouldn't have cared that Sasuke was with a married woman, add on the fact that she is being faithful herself, so her view of Kushina would change as well. Considering that Minato also was trying to take that same trip that Fugaku and Mikoto, if Kushina was smart, she would have done it because when the pregnancy occurs, the time frame may not fit for Minato to be the "father". Frankly, if she ends up wiith Sasuke in the end, it's whatever for me, it's a matter of Minato being compensated for having to put up with it, when you're a working man trying to put food on the table for your family, jobs can be strenuous, Fugaku's job is less stressful than Minato's. I did notice how she mentions to Sasuke how they never listen to her, but the focus was Naruto's future in the conversation, not sure if she made any input, since she seemed to just be sending pictures to Sasuke. If you do make another Kushina story, I would suggest another character, Sasuke is used too much, along with Raikage and Naruto, seen a little bit of Kiba and Konohamaru, there was once a Jiraiya one. Maybe none of these choices, just someone else. I do appreciate the pacing, but it's just the matter of Minato and Naruto being able to walk away from her, when you think about it, it is realistic, I assume Minato is the same age or older as Kushina, so of course, stamina wears down, but I give him props for trying, hence the trip, Kushina only just looked for sex with him, nothing romantic like the trip that he had planned for the two of them, but in the end, she does deserve some backlash for her infidelity.
Unfortunate to see so many unproductive and prude reviews, there's plenty of vanilla fanfics elsewhere for you folks. This is the best of it's kind and if you don't like it, don't read, simple. This is so fucking hot and the progression now has me REALLY hooked! Love that you've taken the feedback and are incorporating tattoos and piercings into the series, would love to see her get her stomach and pussy pierced eventually and MANY tattoos! I think Kushina is already beyond the point of no return, she's only gonna dive deeper into being a slut, that is her life now, being a slut for her boyfriend!
Now for some more ideas if you're interested that would be hot as fuck!
Would love to see some beach/pool scenes involving them around their families, maybe some underwater sex around Naruto, some erotic massages etc. She's gonna start caring less and less about looking "proper" when around Sasuke in public and around their families and should use the excuse that she's just proud of her new body.
Maybe have them both do some "fitness" modeling together with some steamy pics that get posted online, so they have the thrill of actually being caught but just play it off as modeling. Eventually leading them to erotic modeling that also gets posted online and sexy videos!
You've already hinted that Kushina might be thinking about getting breast implants, hope it happens, Sasuke probably knows a guy who can do it for cheap! Just like the nipple piercings it should be done in secret without her family knowing, preferably after she gets back from a trip with Sasuke, would love to see their shocked reactions! Eventually some lip fillers would be hot too, make her look like a bit of a bimbo but not too much lol.
More exhibition is always welcome, have them go to music festivals and make Kushina dress up in a super slutty rave outfit. Maybe Sasuke takes her out on a nude beach and they run into some of Naruto's old classmates/mutual friends who may or may not recognize Kushina through her sunglasses or something like that, have Sasuke show off his slut but only he can touch.....for now.
I think Mikoto should be first to know about their relationship and actually support it and keep it secret! Should also start normalizing Sasuke touching and being around Kushina in front of Naruto, he might think it's a bit weird, but would never expect there's something going on, at least for now. Sasuke just helped Kushina get the body of her dreams, she's just being thankful that's all.
Can't wait to see everyone's reaction to Kushina's piercings, wonder what kind of excuse she makes for her family. Also can't wait to see her show off a lot more in public and at home, she worked hard for her body and shouldn't be ashamed. With mini skirts, super tight crop tops, backless and strapless dresses, micro bikinis, thongs, and sling bikinis showing off her thighs and ass and beginning to not wear a bra so that everyone can see her piercings poking thru and getting her wet!!
Eventually Sasuke should start sharing her with Naruto's classmates/friends and then strangers but for now she's his slut only. The fun shouldn't end after Kushina gives birth either, she should be slutty during her pregnancy too and nobody should know who the child's father is, although they may have their suspicions but wouldn't dare acuse her of anything yet.
A Namikaze/Uchiha family trip or backyard BBQ would be nice for the thrill of getting caught by both and being slutty around Mikoto who hopefully already knows by then. Have Kushina in a super skimpy bikini near the pool after a quickie with Sasuke and have his cum drip down her legs in front of everyone, they may or may not suspect anything but Mikoto DEFINITLEY knows what happened. She then scoops it off her legs and eats it in front of them!
Those are just a few ideas I have, I understand it's your story and you're doing an awesome job! Please keep us updated, you have the best slutty Kushina story on your hands and it's got so much potential!
Kind of follows the same formula as many Sasukushi stories, which I'm not really a fan of, pacing is good, though, I honestly hope Mikoto doesn't support the relationship, maybe it's a different ending, guess people like cheaters and ruined relationships, I can only hope Kushina does realize the mistakes of an affair, maybe that's when the pregnancy comes into play. But Minato and Naruto seriously don't deserve that
Fuck YES this is what this story is all about and this was my favorite chapter yet! Love seeing Kushina now crave Sasuke and do things for him, didn't think she would get piercings so quickly but it's a very welcome surprise. As you suggested I hope she dresses to show off more of her abbs and thighs now, maybe in skirts! Loved the faster pacing, it didn't feel forced and you did a great job explaining Kushina's increased desire for Sasuke. Now the real fun can begin! Can't wait to see what happens with tattoos and the cum that Sasuke left deep inside her. You had me so worried you abandoned this story but me and my homies are so greatful you are continuing! Love the thrill of them fucking so near their family members, Sasuke should pay visit to her house and fuck her there too to get even lol.
Damn, Kushina is really getting into this affair, I love it. Although I am concerned she isn't thinking things through, she needs to come to a decision about her future. I love this pairing, so I hope she stays with Sasuke.
Thank you so much for updating again. I love how Kushina is slowly becoming corrupted overtime. Laying the ground work for her to slowly become a mega slut with the piercings and the tattoo. I tend to love my stories to be darker, so I wouldn't mind, Naruto and Sasuke fighting about something; maybe Naruto complains how his mom has changed and badmouths her and he beats Naruto up in a fight badly. Kushina finds out and instead of being mad she praises Sasuke, and even says "he deserved it, if you wanted, you could have chidori'd him and sent him to the ICU, and I wouldn't even be mad"
Either way excellet story.
This went a direction I feel is a lot less tittilating for me, personally.
I wanted Kushina to remain aloof, using Sasuke as a 'human dildo' as it were. Maybe he gets too clingy and she moves on, teasing him, making him want her more and more etc.
She's started to act like the needy one though. It's way less sexy.
My preferences obviously aren't grounds for negative reviews though, just wanted to let you know this probably isn't for me anymore. Cheers for the work so far, love me some slutty Kushina.
Is the story going to be updated ?
Oh you little rat. Things are about to be that much more complicated. Thanks for writing this, it's amazing.
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