After reading potential ideas for the IG/Selfie account at this point I am wondering if Kushina will eventually start not caring about the post being for women. You've shown her in this chapter and the others to be more concerned with the numbers and other than some token resistance to it being men for the majority she is proud to be gaining followers. Personally, I am looking forward to seeing how she changes because of this. By that I mean if she will start to draw more validation from it and change at her core. Right now she still is trying to come across as humble, but part of me is wondering if she'll eventually act more entitled by the end of this story (she already seems to do so to me and she's brushing it off).

The guise for her and Sasuke to have sex was alright. Though unless you plan on having them trying to use family/large get-togethers to have sex (they seem to be leaning into as close to exhibitionism as possible) as a way to start everyone getting suspicious it might be a little unbelievable for these things to happen as often. I know this is a smut story, but with your statements on the fall and everything I assumed a matter of realism would be put through. I'd imagine Naruto would be suspicious soon if this keeps happening (blackouts) while he's home.

The lemon itself was okay, personally, I felt it was short and that it started off strong, but kinda was just 'told' and not described to us readers if that makes sense as it went along. Also, I'm rereading again and Sasuke only came once and then dipped. For how much you alluded to him being backed up I'd have thought he'd go for more, Kushina too. Though I'd guess the alcohol actually would handle that. (what with it causing impotence)

I'd imagine that the sex tape will be the next big sexual act between the two. Though unless it is a similar thing to their getaway I am unsure where it will be recorded. I'd imagine that would be a sex-filled day and not a simple 2-3 hour session.

Lastly, I don't know if you mean to hint at it but Kushina seems to be caring less and less after they are done having sex about evidence. Can I assume that this will be the straw that breaks the camel's back? (Her laziness) I really really am looking forward to the fall of their affair and I can't see this ending well still (and hope it doesn't, While I am a fan of happy endings I don't believe either of the protags deserves so in this instance.)

All in all a decent chapter, I didn't notice any spelling mistakes. Thanks for reading my word vomit.

What I can say I like how this story is going on and how kushina has slowly becoming more and more open on her relationship with sasuke. Maybe get her to open more for her fan page or something like that 

Please, please let Sasuke fuck Kushina's ass soon.

Nice chapter! You have a few spelling errors throughout but it's not something I think is detracting from the story. I have to wonder though how much longer this affair can go on. They are both getting bolder when they think they can get away with it and there's bound to be something that will give them away. And again, gotta hope that it's not a happy ending. Not a bad one, but just not a happy one. They both seem unconcerned with the consequences and actually seem to find some amusement in picturing it. I'd like to see that arrogance or overconfidence paid xD

Other than that, the lime/teasing up to the lemons was also hot as well. Definitely, 10/10 ancestors will not speak to me again xD The only thing I can say for that is MAKE LONGER. MOAR. xD TOO SHORT (not really am doing a bit, but the sentiment I hope is coming across) all in all good chapter!

Finally after 4 months

Wonderful chapter
I am eager for next let's see How the affair finally come to light.
Loved the way Kushina guided him to her room after party
 

I just recently found this story and read through the reviews.
First, thank you for the read!!! I think it's a well enough-written story for smut and speaking of the smut it sure is exciting!!!!!

I probably will join the discord to ask if I don't see anything soon with the next chapter, just so I can get my own clarity lol. But I do wonder what the consequences you mentioned in the AN for chapter 9 are going to be. Like I said the smut is exciting! and I'm looking forward to however many more chapters there are of it. If I had to hazard a guess though, I think they were going to be caught soon and the story being wrapped up as this is an affair story. Probably after Minato's promotion or after the party (just my guess xD). From the sounds of it, she plans on having sex with Sasuke at her own home probably with the party going on (depending on if they both can go away for a quickie.) but definitely after it is over. I'd further guess that Kushina will try to get Minato and Naruto blackout drunk so it can happen. I can't tell though if it will fail as Minato doesn't seem like a big drinker and Naruto is still suspicious of Sasuke's interactions at the very least and may try to push for him to go home. --- Actually, now that I think about it, I don't think she has gotten any tattoos (something you said would happen) so the affair will probably still be ongoing for a few more chapters. I do think though that something needs to happen to showcase the beginnings of them getting caught and the party makes sense, at least to me of getting the groundwork started. Not to mention the video evidence on Sasuke's phone (Wondering if Sasuke will leave it and Itachi being the responsible bro he is, will unlock to double-check if anything is still ongoing)---

Going back to the consequences though. You did gloss over/mention this chapter (CH11 for anyone reading this later) what Kushina would be willing to have happened which is pretty much just letting the divorce go through without asking for anything. Which is "fair" of her to think xD. But I can't help but wonder what the emotional consequences of her actions are going to be and not just from Minato and Naruto. From the sounds of it, she still has some feelings for Minato (I may be reading too much into this) as you portrayed her feeling bitter about him not commenting on her nudity and being bent over at all and the thoughts of her impending divorce (specifically her not wanting to think of them at all). Her allowing him to have sex also showcases this (though now that I think about it maybe I definitely am reading into this. You stated her reasons were to keep suspicion off of her, but she could have just as easily said she was tired) and her feelings of lackluster sex seem to still bring this up. At least physically, as you described her pussy feels the heat of wanting a good pounding. Again might just be me reading into this, but they did get married after all. She must have found something of worth in him. If she does have some lingering feelings or maybe even not (following is just an idea for some drama that could lead to Kushina needing some sex to take her mind off of it) I'm curious to see exactly if, before they are caught, Minato actually has a sit down with her and talks to her about his lack of sexual care and apologizes and promises to do better. You've showcased him to be the trope of the responsible bread-winner husband that just doesn't communicate with his wife and vice-versa and you could have his promotion give him even more time at home. (Maybe a work-from-home job?) At that point, you'd either have some drama of her either feeling her love for him bloom again at his love for her and his want to do better. (Which I would think he'd maybe start initiating sex more and that seems to be her point of contention/feelings of loss in her marriage) And maybe start asking what he can do to be better (maybe not as good as Sasuke but still fulfilling sex just to throw in some confusion). Or have her just think it's too little too late and have to start distancing herself and throw herself further into it with Sasuke.

Regardless, I can't honestly think of Kushina and Sasuke getting a happy ending with their bonds with their families intact. ---Also, Sasuke still lives with his parents and has most of his financial needs met. He's in for a rude awakening with realistic job opportunities for someone in his position is slim to support a couple now that I think about it xD.--- But back to my thoughts on the possible ending. I can also see Minato actually putting off a divorce and trying to make his marriage work. My reasoning for this is that he's obviously not as forceful but he has shown a remarkable amount of care for his family and faithfulness to his wife (for a smut fic at least). I don't think any man after years of marriage would want it to be thrown away (though it is almost like a cuck mentality which Minato obviously doesn't have) If only to cause drama and keep the affair going possibly or to leave it bittersweet as Kushina either decides to break it off and stay with Minato (with more boundaries obviously) but a lack of "superb" orgasms anymore. Ignoring all that though, I can't see Sasuke's and Kushina's life, if Kushina does get a divorce, going well at all. She has no job and is a housewife But I think I've made this review long enough as it is.

I want to reiterate that this was an enjoyable read and an enjoyable smut fic as well. Please don't take my thoughts as negatives, just as ideas for the story possibly to cause more drama or they are just my observations of what I've seen and how I've interpreted the story. I look forward to the next chapter!

Woohoo new update hype!!!! Author-san did an amazing job with the realism of Kushina and Sasuke feelings for each other and now they can have more naughty fun now that it's clear they have each other's backs no matter what. Kushina Uchiha sounds hot, hope they take a lot more sexy pics together and make more sex tapes! 

Wow, this chapter was great anticipation for the next! Can't wait for what she does for Sasuke next chapter

Is everything alright? Would love to see you continue the story or at least let us know where you're at with the chapter. 

Well Kushina got a taste of what she can do when her anus is stimulated.
What I want the most is for Sasuke to fuck her in the ass soon and for it to be spectacular

Holy Kushina's becoming such a nympho slut I love it! Her sexual awakening has been so hot and I hope it's only just getting started! Her being on the phone wit her family while getting plowed but Sasuke was hotttt those double meaning phrases! 

Ha, spelling error, that last bit is supposed to say you have things I disagree with and I have things that you disagree with, not "you have things that you disagree with", wanted to clarify that

I think you just look for things to argue, I already stated why it wouldn't surprise me, based on how she descripted her early stages with Minato, it seems similar to Sasuke, it's all "perfect" and all, but you never know and neither do I, after the divorce or how many babies they have, Sasuke could start acting like Minato is now and it's literally back to square one all over again for Kushina, not saying she gets passed around, she just goes for a "new" Sasuke. Never know what could happen, can't directly communicate with the author to know his or her ideas. I'm just going off Kushina's thought process on when she was comparing the two. As for the hacking thing, ever heard the saying about curiosity, it would make Mikoto wonder who was the married that Sasuke was messing with. I see the gym thing as something in BitterNTR's Kushina Sex-ventures series, who does help this author, I believe. Now I do agree that they could start slipping up as you mentioned on the trips, it would be suspicious after a few trips, but a slip up, somewhere down the line is Sasuke saying he's going on a trip with Naruto and Naruto shows up at the Uchiha house after Sasuke has left, which could tie into how discover the similar schedules of Sasuke and Kushina. The reason why I say she may be confusing lust for love is because there's more to a relationship than just sex because that's what it feels like that's all she goes to him for. Yeah, I'm not going to lie, I do think analytically because I'm here for the story, not the sex. The ideas really only go about on the different places where they can have sex, which I really don't care about. Which does surprise me why the author doesn't branch out on other platforms because as I said before those ideas, keep them, it'd be better between you and the author because it feels lackluster if the author uses the idea for a chapter, but I've already seen how it goes because you explained it in your comment. It's the same with my own comments, but I'll say this, practically all stories on here depict Kushina as a lustful being, so it also wouldn't surprise me if any of the ideas are incorporated as well, even though, I've seen them before. Also the slip up with him mentioning Naruto, it would be nonchalant without thinking because he hangs out Naruto's house so much, it would only bring back Mikoto's suspicions, when Naruto shows up looking for Sasuke or something, but as I said who knows what could happen. The author probably has the structured from beginning to end, they just have other things in their daily life to do than hang out on AFF. But you and I are not going to do this back and forth, we both said our piece, you have things that you disagree with and I have things that you disagree with, we're changing the other's mind, I'm not trying to change your thoughts, I'm just saying min like you are doing as well, can we agree on that

Gotta disagree, I don't think Kushina would cheat on Sasuke nor would it happen so late in the future where she's 60 and when nothing core about the story like the ntr or sex scenes matter anymore. Don't think an epilogue that much later in the story is needed but it's way too early to think about that. Author already clarified she won't be passed around, she's sticking with Sasuke only. Now about Minato getting suspicious I don't buy it, he's always working and we've never seen Kushina show an ounce of interest in his work so he probably expected her not to come with him. Kushina then overhearing him talking to a woman and stalking him to the bar should also destroy any thoughts she had that Minato was unfaithful, it was made clear that Minato is married to his work. Suspension of disbelief is necessary otherwise stories like this and fanfics in general wouldn't exist outside their source materials. We've never once seen Minato get suspicious and frankly, one small thing as simple as not going on a trip with him shouldn't suddenly trigger or bother him at all, it would be forgotten by the time Kushina started going on trips with Sasuke. Similarly with Mikoto and Itachi, it's been months since the ASSUMPTION from Itachi that Sasuke was messing with a married woman. Mikoto seemed more bothered than him, but again it's been months now and there's been nothing to trigger her suspicions, rather the call from Suigetsu should be a sigh of relief for her and get her off Sasuke's back for a while. She already thanked Kushina for getting through to Sasuke and probably mentally thanks her for keeping Sasuke away from trouble, she suspects NOTHING between the 2 of them. Nothing you've suggested regarding further suspicions on the behalf of Minato and Mikoto are directly supported by the story at this time, rather the opposite like I've mentioned. They also wouldn't immediately get suspicious after their first few trips either, it's not like Kushina and Sasuke would always go together. As an alibi Kushina could probably go out of town for a night or two and have Sasuke stay home so nobody suspects anything. They'll keep doing this for a bit while also secretly meeting up on other trips so that nobody would be suspicious for a quite a long time. Naruto and Minato getting a bit weirded out by Kushina's new wardrobe isn't cause for suspicion, the author even directly stated it when Sasuke hugged her in front of Naruto. A woman is going to the gym seriously for the first time in years and completely transformed her body, their first thought should be happiness that she found a way to keep herself busy and healthy. They probably think it's her way of fighting off old age and a midlife crisis. Of course eventually some family members would get suspicious of their trips, especially when they find out that their schedules magically align most of the times when they go out, but they haven't even been on ONE fucking trip yet, let them have their fun while no one suspects anything. Also no way are the Uchihas gonna randomly hack Sasuke's phone when it's laying around lmao, hacking won't even necessary by the time they ACTUALLY get suspicious. If anything Kushina and Sasuke in the future would get careless and start slipping up here and there, maybe they'll see her as his wallpaper or some of their regular texts when it comes to that point. 

The author never explicitly asked for ideas but anyone is welcome to try and give feedback in the context of what kind of story this is and what it's shaping up to be. I would've never made my suggestions if Kushina didn't become so bold in chapter 8, the story is what the story becomes as long as the progression makes sense which it does. Just irks me when people spend time saying "this story is not for me" because it's not productive. Indirectly these people are either saying "bye" which is fine, or they're demanding changes that would change the entire nature of the story. I keep getting the feeling you're thinking way too critically and "realistically" at times when its clear the direction the story is going. The story wouldve never made it anywhere where it's at now if we were strictly being "realistic", again suspension of disbelief is key here. No, Kushina ain't confusing lust for love. She calls Sasuke her boyfriend, made and continues to make so many changes FOR HIM, and wants his fucking baby. If she strictly wanted sex and keep him at distance that would've been established and cleared many chapters ago. Would literally make no sense for her to distance herself now, she's only falling deeper lol. She clearly said Sasuke's makes her feel things she's never felt before and that he reaches places Minato never could, she didn't how good sex or a boyfriend could be until she met Sasuke, it's not a fling anymore, it's serious.  I don't see how some ideas seem rushed, are you talking about the ideas NOW currently in the story or ideas for the future? Because either way, nothing's being rushed lol, would you rather read 10 more chapters of them sneaking away into a hotel room once in a while, with Mikoto still being paranoid MONTHS later? You said it yourself we need to see something else because the same stuff gets old eventually. Slowing down from this point makes no sense, especially when nobody is suspicious of them being together, literally nobody. It's actually the best fucking time to speed things up a bit, I've always treated chapter 8-9 as the introduction of a new "arc" in the story. Previous chapters were build up, then their relationship changes and becomes more serious, now some suspicion is off their back and they should get a few months to have a lot of time together while no one is on their case. I truly don't see the need or desire to regress the story, literally what would that even achieve? Let them have their fun for now and later they'll inevitably start slipping up and we can enter into actual suspicion from their families. All this is up to author at the end of the day but I think them having their fun for a while and slipping up later is a good way to cast actual suspicion onto them when the time comes. However they've been quite tame for a while now and playing it safe because of Mikoto which is why I was suggesting they ramp things up just a little bit now that Mikoto is calming down and with Kushina getting hornier and hornier, her sex toys aren't enough for her anymore, she needs higher thrills. 

But that's a suggestion for the author, you wouldn't know that if I had DMed them directly and it does give readers who talk to authors a better understanding of their ideas for the story, but at the same time, the author is not really asking for ideas, just a review on the chapter or as you and the other user put it, the critique of two chapters, which helps them out, but I do think some ideas feel rushed, primarily because they're already having sex and in the realistic aspect, it feels like Kushina is confusing lust for love, when you think about it