Reviews for There’s a hole at the hot springs!By : c0p13r |
@Siklos88 - Oh! And don't forget that 92-chan seemed to under the mistaken dillusion that a lack of capitalization is a SPELLING mistake. Our extra special shinobi claimed that C0P13R "also misspelled it when starting your first chapter". Lol.
How dare you C0P13R! You apparently mispelled 'There's A Hole at the Hot Springs' by spelling it 'There's a hole a the hot springs'! Shame on you! No dog treats for you.
Oh my this IS fun. Maybe next time (and I hope there is one) I'll actually log in.
-Mick Gesitt of the Mountain
Oh wow! This story is so hot and lewdly described!
I was wondering if you did writing commissions? :D
I've been looking forward to this! And then it cuts off, right as it gets going!
But I'm happy anyway because you've got Ino possibly getting in on the action, and that's even better. And you've got Naruto not completely oblivious about who he's been fucking which is nice, I've been worried about that.
As an aside, I do hope Shiho gets revisited at some point. You had Naruto pop her cherry, but he didn't even finish... that can't feel good for her first time. She deserves at least one creampie, surely.
Lmao, even when 92-chan tries to correct you he still fucks up. Word of advice 92-chan, you don't capitalize the "a" in a title.
Gonna laugh if Kushina get's pregnant, that'll be one hell of a explanation to try and spill.
Do update soon, I wanna see Mikoto, Kaori, Yoshino, Tsume and Hana all join in as well
Ha! I bet you thought I was long gone didn't you? I'm poised to make my triumphant return, but before I can do that there's just one thing that I wanted to point out while reading your story. I immediately spotted this when scanning through the various stories in the archive, so being the generous person that I'm known for in real life I wanted to tell you how to correct this mistake. The proper heading is written like this. "There's A Hole at the Hot Springs." You also misspelled it when starting your first chapter, now this makes us even because I've gone Ultra Instinct on you.
A Shrouded Shinobi chuckles in the darkness.
I just want a full on Naruto and Buta story now
Hey man,
I just wanted to let you know that your stories are always amazing and phenomenal. I actively look forward to seeing and reading them. I wish I could convey better how awesome you are, but you're pretty much the one fanfic author I would happily drop everything to read a new chapter from.
let's goooo
I'm curious, was that actually Naruto?
First off, love EVERYTHING you write!! From you wonderful lewdness in all your lemon fics to your amazing deprativy in your humor fics (shit on you chronicles), everything you crank out is magnificent. Was wondering if you'd ever be interested in tackling a project that I've yet to see aside from a writer in HF. I've been YEARNING for a Shikamaru harem fic (hell, a basic orgy oneshot would suffice). I think he doesn't really get much love and seeing as you tend to take on non-conformist fics, was hoping this would be something that could peak your interest. Maybe he's a sex specialist of sorts (teaching the girls their first times with their respected companion should be with someone with some experience). Would love to see him plowing Hinata, Tenten, Karui, Karin and of course Sakura!!! *sigh* having him pummel that pink haired pussy would be nothing short of amazing!
This was a great chapter man I can't wait for the next one
Lmao, you added "Not Cuck Naruto" to the tags. Can't blame you though, even if I don't really care for Cuck Naruto either, some of these guys go crazy in the comments and reviews of those stories, and have like zero self awareness
This is fucking hilarious. I love how you've crafted this investigation into the gloryhole, and the way you phrased Konohamaru not ratting Naruto out; perfection. It truly was selfless. Throwing his pride away and calling it a worm. Too good. I would still read this even if it had no sex in it, I enjoy the humour greatly.
Not to mention the romance forming between Kushina and Mikoto, which isn't going smoothly but is still cool.
Then finally, the sex. Superb. Hot and Lewd. Not much to say here besides that they are really damn good.
Few things I am confused about though. Such as the few mentions to your name. Are they meant to be humorous 4th wall breaks? Or were they typos, some how? I don't know. My final point of confusion is the final line of chapter 5. Why did she mention Mikoto? I feel like I missed something.
I'll take the time here to show my degenerate, perverted side and speak my un-asked for wishes. First: for it to stay a 'only Naruto having sex' story. As in, no other men. That's just how I like it. Second: Kushina. Unknowing sex or blowjob with Naruto at the glory hole, and then knowing afterwards. Third: Impregnation. Naruto with anybody.
I don't really have any expectation that you'll humour me at all, but I figured, fuck it, might as well say something.
Anyways, lengthy review - fin
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