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Reviews for The Conquering Mutt

By : saul
  • From AFFModerator on April 12, 2020

    Let's take the insults and name-calling elsewhere, please. I'm perfectly happy to delete all of the reviews which are not relevant to story content.

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  • From c0p13r on April 08, 2020

    So three women ranked as the three hottest women, but Kushina is indisputably the hottest according to the men?  So it's no contest!  That's what not contest' means!

    I can't believe I chose to focus on that part with this blocky mess, but oh well...

    With all the G-cups and E-cups and Nee-cups, to proportionalize with the manga, theoretically, Tsunade had better be walking around with two wheelbarrows lugging her knockers here and there!

    what might've set you apart from the usual trope of Kushina-sensei stories would have been excluding the OCs (a terrible resort for any author) and maybe add Naruto on the team for better dynamic.  But why am I giving this advice?  The fic feels beyond redemption...

    How do squats and jogs give them huge, jiggly asses?  Ever notice when your girlfriend or wife starts up their exercise routine (again), their tits and ass are the first things to go?!


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  • From NotAnyWay on March 24, 2020

    This is like the 5th story I've read on this site with the exact same premise. Like I've got no qualms with the pairing (despite how weird it is) but y'all gotta get more creative than the same Kushina's Genin team with 2 OCs and Kiba. Can't wait for the next chapter where Kushina starts offering sexual rewards to her team if they do well.


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  • From PennilessRonin on March 24, 2020

    Oh wow. Another Kushina story, this one a blatant ripoff of "One Bored Housewife" by Smoke (since apparently you have no creative talent of your own). Right down to some of the descriptions.

    So here's some advice: go fuck yourself until you can come up with a story of your own. Looks like the original's dead (which is good since even it was hardly original or unique) and your sad attempt at combining it with elements of "Stop Teasing Us Sensei!" by LordOfLust isn't going to help keep your own alive.

    Fucking seriously, the Naruto fandom's fucking pathetic these days.


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  • From LUCIFER-X5 on March 24, 2020

    hey friend this chapter is very good I hope that soon you can have more time for you to upload the next chapter lucky. ps: please do not abandon this story and put a lot of lemon, hehehe


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