Reviews for Eye for an EyeBy : c0p13r |
Nice, hopefully you make more of this. You can do a scenario where Ay blackmails either Hiashi or Kakashi to blow up the moon during The Last unless he is given permission to have his way with the Hyuga sisters, even Sakura as well in return for sparing their lives
As always, your stories catch my attention, especially with a premise like this! I hope to see more of Hinata-with-many-men done by you.
If I may be a bit bold to ask a personal preference, maybe next time you could add some more teasing? I know that Ay is a no-nonsense man, but there are many possibilities to play out something like that, for example captivity, marital foreplay (with Naruto of course), a special kunoichi training etc.
Anyway, I hope to see another innocent-Hinata story from you soon!
Hawt. More like this one plz
and have a happy new years
Well, I actually wound up liking this one more than the original (Hinata and the Thunderstorm) and most of that can be laid at the fact that it's a Hinata foursome where she very obviously underestimated the man she was about to fuck.
Pretty hot!
And I wanna be all "yeah, sure, Naruto-kun will totally understand..." but he actually probably will and honestly, at this point in the series I could hardly see him complaining about losing Hinata for Sasuke. Although when I think about it like that it's actually pretty depressing.
Oh well. Hinata's happy. Naruto's happy. Sasuke's...gonna Sasuke, I guess. :D
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