Reviews for The MuttBy : DJoko |
When did you update this story?
never thought I'd see Tsunade being so submissive
whilst i'm not normally one for Tsunade smut this was fucking awesome
So with Kiba's growing confidence and descent into debauchery, how long until he starts taking advantage of Tsunade's newfound addiction to him to make her teach him some of those nifty super-strength chakra control techniques, or give him some special medical treatments so that he's guaranteed to become a hyper-masculine example of what an alpha-Male muscle-god should look like as he gets older?
God I love your writing... thank you so much for the update!
dayum! i just reread chapter 1 yesterday. that month wait felt like torture! but it was well worth it for this quality of content! i love messy blowjob scenes and the girl sucking her pussy off the guy, this was hot as FUCK!!!
i was a big fan of the original of this. sad to see it gone.
btw for constuctive critisism, your writing is amazing and i love the way you characterize the girls and the main stud. the only point i start losing interest is when you keep trying to one up yourself with the perversity by throwing the girls we love to random old men and even dogs. please keep that out of this, thank you..............but even if you add it i'll probably still read this. the smut is too good to pass up.
btw i hope kiba has different relationships with different girls. that would be really fun to see. some of them just being three holes to use and a select few competeing to be his girlfriend/wives. begging for his babies and whatnot.
anyway, this chapter FUCKING ROCKED and i cant wait for more. please keep it up.
Can't wait for more!
Well I can already say that this rewrite is a lot better formatted and written than the original I read on HF. I have a soft spot for Kiba Harem fics because of the amount of fics where Naruto or Sasuke gets one. Everybody should write more of Kiba and you are starting out great.
Can't wait to read this new version! 😋
Are you going finish your other stories like Kushina the sexual Sensei. Its good that you are improving quality of your writing.
Sad that you deleted the old, one, but looking forward to more of this one
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