Reviews for Two KindsBy : BigE2955 |
Erotic goodness...
FYI: there are several sentences where Temari "kicked" his dick as opposesd to licking it. You might want to check that ;)
While I like the premise I'm still not big on the SasuHina pairing. I guess I'm too big of a NaruHina fan to look past it and enjoy it.
Just to be clear I'm not a huge of Naruto getting cucked or Hinata getting it on with another guy that isn't Naruto, or even making Naruto a prick or any other reason to not care if hes being cheated on. However if it NaruKO then I don't mind.
Sorry for that little rant thing I just needed to put it in.
But my preferences aside this story is interesting and I'm a disappointed that Naruto isn't the bull.
Though I am wondering if you have any plans for another story or updating an old one that has NaruHina as a thing or anything else that is outside your standard MO? I mean are you planning on writing a story or two that focus on another male character hooking up with the girls of Naruto?
I'm looking foward to more. Almost as much as Tamari. ^_^
i like the concept, i would love it though if you could update some of your older stories in the near future. i don't really care which one you got so many good ones, the sasuke as a teacher or the narutoxfemsasuke story etc
I like the general concept of this idea but the real question is how far are you going to go and if you are going to include Hinata in any scenes in the near future and how many women are you planning on giving to Sasuke at this point?
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