Reviews for AsexualBy : Luva |
Love it!
This story is great and I really hope you conintue it.
In the words of our King Bobby B "RELEASE THR NEXT CHAPTER BEFORE I PISS ME-SELF"
This story is really great! there's really not enough of this kind. please keep up the good work, i'm eagerly awaiting more.
Hot as fuck.
Also makes more sense then the stories where Sasuke is the actual stud.
Nice chapter. Could more girls be added in later chapters?
This is actually fascinating to read actually. Hopefully this story expands to naruto having other women as well.
Very good continuation.
Great chapter, in the end Hinata is quite a pervert, hahahaha.
Keep it up.
Perfect story. Canon sasuke never liked pussy and always liked to be near men like team taka and he went to train with a guy that was only interested in his body and eyes
Awesome dude, cant wait for the next chapter
Nice to see a new fix that's not either yaoi naruto or naruto getting cuckold please keep going
Excellent start! There are two things I really like about this story that help it avoid the things about cuck/cuckquean stories that usually turn me off.
1. I like the way you characterized the cuckhold (Sasuke here, but applies to all stories like this) as simply not interested and looking out for his wife, rather than bashing and emasulating him. I know some people are into that, but I'm glad you didn't go that route.
2. I LOVE the way you wrote Hinata. Rather than just like a sex trophy as she is often written in these stories to be snatched up by the alpha-male protag, she is the one convincing Naruto to go along with it and taking her turn to be on top during sex even if she still enjoys being submissive to him. Very very hot!
Please write more :)
Very good chapter It is an interesting story. I already look forward to see how you develop the plot.
Keep it up.
Not poorly written, but the cuck thing just isn’t for me
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