Many of the people who say a slutty kushina is better than an incest fic are just more obsessed with Naruto humiliation and NTR than they're bothered with incest. You can't stand to see kushina fuck her son so instead you want her sleep with a creep and all her son's friends because 'slutty kushina is best kushina'. They'll defend their words with ' it's just a story' but they can't stand incest even though 'its just a story'.  Keep kushina far from kizashi, please. I wouldn't exactly fault her if she ends up sleeping with kizashi but if she decides once isn't enough and starts sleeping around, I'll be really bummed out. Best if she doesn't sleep with him, period.

I'm not asking for her to end up with Naruto but seriously it wouldn't kill if you DIDN'T let her end up with anyone or even better, she can get in a relationship with a female. Lesbian kushina is better than slutty kushina. If they're so fond of slutty kushina, they can just go back to reading the dozens of stories in this site with that exact content than try persuading a guy who likes to write unique and non-overused content. People like using her because she's a MILF but I've never seen one with tsume or Tsunade or yoshino. They're all MILFs and even better, they're actually alive and two are single. It's more out of a desire to do something to hurt Naruto than anything and it's just annoying already

I meant to say when is naruto going crazy on kushina 

Ugh kizashi or whatever his name is freaks me out, plz keep him away. Anyways when is naruto going crazy on Ludhiana? That’s all I’m waitin for 

You subverted my expectations with this rewrite. In the original story Naruto fucked Sakura while Kushina watched, then fucked Kushina, then in the second chapter they're fucking again right out of the gate, and later fuck in public while making eye contact with Sakura.

But you read that hot as shit story you wrote, deleted it, and thought: "I know what this is missing: Fifteen fucking pages of tumblresque one-sided SasuNaruSaku pinning while Kushina undergoes the complex character development neccesary for her to come to terms with the fact she wants to fuck her son, just in time for me to abandon the story completely to blue ball everyone again for another half-baked new story."

You used to be like the Michael Jordan of smut. What the fucking hell happened.

In six months, you've published Games with Kushina, The Promised Title, The Scroll, The Troublesome Bed, Angel's Order Prequel and A Blossom Blooms in Kumo. Six stories. All abandoned in chapter one and left with no sex scenes. The people that like this crap would shit themselves if they read your old stuff. Now, when Ino actually fucked at the end of your latest story, it was actually a pleasant surprise.

Bring your old writing style back, for fucks sake. You're so much better than this it hurts.

Now eventually you do plan to have sex scenes on your, on your sex stories, right? Hello? Hello? Yes?

Your old stories were so good. What the hell happened. Now you're all setup and no payoff. You don't need a fucking three-act structure for fucking porn. Cut the setup, cut the lore, cut the "comedy", and get to the fucking already.

So yeah, you do know Naruto post war isn't the sheer fuck up you constantly write him as right? Sakura doesn't even come close to his base speed or reaction time even without any stronger forms. Also, why is it, he's just taking shit lying down? Sakura was the one that started dating him in this story and now he's trying to get Sasuke and Naruto knows that.

And as stupid as it things can be, Sasuke values Naruto so much more than he values Sakura at this point in time. If Naruto came out and said it, Sasuke would probably be disgusted with her for treating his best friend, someone he considers brother like she has been.

Ew, Kizashi is being a real creep to the point of being obsessed with Kushina. Just keep that dude away from her lol. Really hoping Kushina and Naruto get aroused with each other to the point where they have a threesome with Hinata, that would be dope 

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Oof. Choza's wife? That's...that's some mightily unfortunate business Kizashi. As for Choza and the unfortunately named Buta, power to 'em? If that's what keeps their marriage afloat and happy, who am I to judge fictional characters for their kinks.

Although I'd like to minimize the amount of time spent pondering on the Akimichi clans sex life.

As for the rest of the chapter, Naruto's had one hell of a day. Constant hardon because apparently he's already subconsciously attracted to Kushina and how's it get dealt with? Very publically hotdogging it in/on her ass while he has her bent over doggystyle (and that should be a fic; couple/married  Naruto/Hinata doing naughty things in a place where they're guaranteed to be caught) with her father watching, groping Sakura while she's got a hand on him before the kind of excitement that comes with naughty shit in plain view, getting a glimpse of Hanabi's super traditional thong and then capping it all off with getting a hell of a show from Kushina.

No wonder the poor bastard came without even touching himself. Anyways, I liked it. You managed the fine line between pure smut and anime-esque antics perfectly. The constant stumbling into a new erotic scenario was just really well done and on top of that, it's promising some damnably good future chapters.

Which I continue to look forward to. :D

I think you should have naruto paired up with Hinata or Hanabi, I would much prefer that over another incest story. Simply make Kyuubi make Kushina more and more horny and have her have sex with multiple men Kizashi for example trust me slutty Kushina is best Kushina.

I honestly do believe kizashu should get a chance of plowing Kushina. He did help her a lot after all and does seem attractive to Kushina so hopefully they fuck. There are too many Naru/Kushina stories out there hopefully this one will be different and Kushina will sleep with other men.

Was worried this was gonna be another Kushina sluts herself out story, but I’m glad that I’ve been wrong. I’m not very familiar with your work so I hadn’t been sure what to expect.

It’s cool to see that there are seemingly 2 antagonists in this story, 1 focused on Kushina and 1 focused on Naruto. Already you’ve done a good job with the characterization of these two antagonists. Kizashi’s really creepy, unhealthy obsession of Kushina seen by him sleeping with Choji’s mom who imitating Kushina, and Hiashi’s arrogant desire to exploit Naruto’s status by having him marry into his clan.

I hope you don’t really warp Kizashi and Hiashi’s into doing something really reprehensible. Been seeing a trend of messed up stuff lately in the fan fiction community. 

Anyway, really appreciate your story and your time. Rooting for Naruto and Kushina in the end to beat their antagonists and even beat Kurama’s influence to an extent. Thanks for everything.

Huh. Didn't see Kizashi coming, although it makes sense - absurdly hot, now widowed, MILF returns from the dead. Not-a-zombie MILF is presumably lonely, welcome of any company she gets around her age and just as she might be lonely, she might also be desperately horny and willing to give it up to the closest thing to a friend she's got.

Kizashi's basically doing what all of us normal mortal men would do in his situation, especially if the endgame is Kushina Uzumaki. I respect you, Kizashi. Sure you're a lil' bit of a scumbag, but aren't we all?

:D

Seriously though, I like that we're slowly building up the perversion and the sluttiness instead of jumping right into it. That, plus the knowledge that it's all Kushina is going to make the coming chapters all the worthwhile. I'm definitely curious if Kizashi's gambit's gonna pay off or if Mebuki's going to turn her husband into a pretzel.

I'm rooting for him, at least. Here's to Kushina draining his balls and then having Mebuki turn him into a pretzel! XD

I was afraid it might go to that route but then I read on and it started to fork a different way that gave me hope. But it can still go to incest so I am still a little bit worried. 

If it does go the incest way I'll simply just drop it, no harm no hate.

So nobody finds it awkward that Naruto is gona fuck his own mother. When the words 'mom' and 'son' appear picture your own moms and yourselfs then proudly whack away lol

I like where your going with this. I love Kyubi and Kushina's interaction the sexual tension is very strong. I hope Kyubi gets a chance to make her more horny and sexually frustrated leading her to have sex with Kizashi or maybe Narutos friends. It would be interesting if Kushina becomes more and more like a slut as the chapters go on.