Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for Feeling Left Out

By : dablackstallion
  • From Shaunnn on April 24, 2019

    If I were naruto i would just turn around while creating a mini beastbomb and blow the whole house up while walking out and THEN waste time crying over the cheating bitch... And i don't understand the love part IN NO WAY IT MAKES SENSE! 


    Report Review

  • From Naruto on March 23, 2019

    Can you write a story about kusina cheating on ninyo with kiba or konahamru


    Report Review

  • From Tzeenchen on March 23, 2019

    Wonderful! I only wish there was more description, and muscle worship!

    Reading that Kiba had "Massive Pecs" admittedly made me a little hopeful that, towering over her, he'd lustfully bounce or grope them or bury Hinata's face between them, give his gargantuan bicpes long loving kisses, or even give her a show by self-worshipping his possibly hyper muscle-god bod before letting her and/or Naruto do the same!

    ...I have a hyper-muscle kink. I'm not ashamed to admit it!

    At any rate, LOVE the chemistry between Hinata and Kiba! If there's a genuine sequel, or "second round" to this, I REALLY wanna see how far and how DEEP they might take their now very much evolved relationship... alongside Naruto, of course!

    As being Hokage is SUCH a busy and time consuming job, SOMEONE has to be around for his ever voluptuous wife, the most beautiful woman in Konoha, "Queen of Lust and Gluttony", Uzumaki née Hyuuga Hinata, to care for her when he can't!

    Who better than Konoha's most loyal legendary, and ever increasingly masculine Alpha Male, to constantly and lovingly breed, domineer, look after her?


    Report Review

  • From Jinx on March 22, 2019

    I think, I like Ur story ( this and that one which Kiba taming Naruto and Sasuke).

    Even though Naruto being bullied here, its okay because all I want is to see Naru being happy and loved, or at least happy is enough. I dont mind if he become slut or something like that.

    just please dont make him just sit there watching and say that he is happy because its his fetish. I know its Ur story but ya

    anyway, thank you for writing this story.


    Report Review

  • From Man26600 on March 22, 2019

    it's a great story why not make a 2nd chapter with naruko or akamaru or both
     


    Report Review

  • From Summer-Twilight on March 21, 2019

    Oh. My. God. That was Incredible. 'Discovering Her Lust' was great, but, for me, this takes the cake. It's officially my favourite fan fic as it falls completely in line with my own tastes. In fact, it's almost uncanny. I've been working on some drawings recently involving cuckolding and a stud Kiba in scenarios eerily similar to the ones explored here. So, if you have any interest, once I've posted them online I could link you to them :) Aditiionally! I beg you to please continue this story line! Too many Kiba, cuckolding fanfics get abandoned; I would hate to see this end. And, on that note, thank you very much for writing and uploading this! You have a real talent for writing and I love your style and pacing. Great work. I wish you all the best in your writing endeavours.


    Report Review

  • From Rising_Phallus on March 21, 2019

    Really great writing and detail, even though im personally not a fan of cuck shit myself. Honestly, when reading the preview I thought it was gonna turn into a wierd threesone where naruto was gonna try to pleasure hinata as best he could. Keep up the great stuff man!


    Report Review

  • From wilson6543 on March 20, 2019

    Its a good story I  just want one where naruto comes in finds out and rasengans the motherfucker and then dumps hinata


    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!