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Reviews for The Crimson Bastard

By : The-One-Reborn
  • From DiabolicActor45 on August 20, 2020

    I love this story hope you update it soon keep up the good work. 


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  • From Hmason on October 07, 2019

    loving this story hope for an update soon


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  • From dbray98 on August 11, 2019

    love this fic its really hot, hope you update it soon, want to see him fuck myrcella and cersei at the same time


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  • From Etrinoc on July 21, 2019

    Im really enjoying this story so far. Great work keep it up!


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  • From sasori231 on July 20, 2019

    nice please update


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  • From sasori231 on May 29, 2019

    nice work


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  • From joeparas1988 on May 22, 2019

    Sigh

    Why the mind control bullshit? And why the lolis? Just wait until they're adults and have him actually be seductive.

    It often feels like writers don't know how to even write a seductive character, so they resort to rapey shit and ruin their own stories. It's a shame.


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  • From elchabon on May 21, 2019

    Wonderful chapter.
    Great how he manipulated the girls. Very, very good as he did to channel with his tastes, dreams and personalities as well as use the rivalry between them.
    And the three-eyed raven appeared, clearly he does not know who our hero is.
    Keep it up, waiting for the continuation.


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  • From elchabon on May 08, 2019

    Very good chapter. The continuation is appreciated.
    Great that you added Arya. It's better than the other bitch. How beautiful it is to see how Catelyn has been corrupted.
    Ha, I look forward to seeing the storm that he generated in King's Landing
    As for HBO GoT, I would like to break the fucking face of D and D for completely ruining the series.
    Well at least we have the books and obviously the fics.
    Keep it up.


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  • From immcaine on May 07, 2019

    Save Taena in harem pls


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  • From Deandre on May 06, 2019

    Best Story I’ve read in a while


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  • From guigod on April 29, 2019

    i Wonder if in the next chapter we Will see a cersei/nero scene , that woud be nice 


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  • From immcaine on April 29, 2019

    Pls. Post story on over sites. Like fanfiction or archiveofourown.org


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  • From elchabon on April 29, 2019

    Very good chapter I love that he started Sansa's training.
    Keep it up.
     


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  • From Kurokitsune17 on April 29, 2019

    Congradulations!!! This is currently exactly what I was looking for in a story. An over powered character that does as he wants in westeros. Not worring about the bigger picture. Having a plot but filled with good smut scenes. My favorite, is that instead of pulling the classic through Naruto into it and either butcher his character so much I am left wondering why not just say it is an OC instead of crossover, but you used evil naruto. So an already morally ambiguos character, with so far enough chakra to become a big player. 

    My suggestion for the story, is that you keep him semi-human. He is a normal human, but can push himself beyond to white walker level strengths due to chakra, but is mainly powerful because of the ability to use gen, nin, and tai jutsu. Please don't bring in Kyuubi, it is just overkill and usually doesn't add anything good to the story.

     

    I love this, please keep this going.


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