Reviews for Deal with a GoddessBy : Sloth |
Love it! Keep up the good work.
was hoping for some smut by now
Keep going
I really hope this story isn’t dead, you just got everything set up and it looks great!
This an excellent and intriguing story. I hope it isn’t dead, I’ve been looking for updates and you just started getting to the interesting parts
This was a great chapter, I am glad you posted it and want to see more of this story soon. Also, would it be possible for Sakura to catch Naruto wearing panties and the dildo and maybe start thinking that it is unfair that only Naruto is getting all the attention from Kai before she herself starts moving to do something about it?
Also, if you would add more characters, would it be possible to add Kurotsuchi? Maybe make her see serving Kai as a revenge against her grandpa for being too hard on her all the time and she thinks impregnating from kai would be the best revenge, but he makes it so that she believes she can only get pregnant if it is in the ass or in public while wearing animal ears and tail, like a black cat or something.
Would it be possible to show a sex scene soon? I really want to see some different type of action if you get my drift.
Oh, and good job with the chapter, I wanted to read more and you did not disapoint at all, it was well done and interesting. Just, try to show some actual action from the type you'd expect of this site
No more? Ah well, was interesting while it lasted.
Please I only got one request please sissyfy hashi hyuga
Please please
I want to see him in thongs or G string
Please update
Really good so far hope you keep going, I feel you should keep writing how you want to though with the sissy naruto stuff its fine but i hope later on you actually turn him into a girl with a jutsu or rinnegan after pains attack kai could corrupt konan and just get the eyes , also with I hope you get tsue claimed as well as turning kiba into a sissy that would be enjoyable. With anko you can really do anything though it would be nice to maybe have a romantic relationship. Also maybe pull a C.R.A. for kai or for naruto and just cuck him.
please make hiashi hyuga a sissy . he has long hair all hiashi need is a sexy female thongs and be submissive to kai
the head of hyuga clan as kai's bitch
your story is amazing please make it longer but its your choice anyway please continue writing
Can you make Naruto wear sexy thongs or G string to even when he is in mission also can you sissyfy hiashi hyuga he has long hair and it would give him control over hyuga clan
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