Reviews for ThunderstruckBy : c0p13r |
A very unique piece I must say. Each chapter keeps on teasing us with the idea that Kushina's going to fall, and yet in this story, she's doesn't...while still giving us some nice cheating lemons!
Very lovely! ^^
Hey, I liked it. A going in for what, in his mind, should have been revenge for all those years ago; for a chance to turn the tables on Kushina and make her scream his name. To not just beat her at her own game but possibly even claim her as his own but only instead to once again fail miserably?
That's awesome. A's the bull in the china shop and Kushina's apparently the ninja hiding behind the register, katana prepped to take out the bull's legs. Or something like that.
In other words I really liked Kushina dominating the fuck out of A. A breath of fresh air in this particular pairing, one made all the better that after all that the Hokage's wife probably went to enjoy herself with her husband while A didn't get to cum.
Good reads, man.
God, Ay became so pathetic! Or Kushina is just too badass. He did crush Hinata in "Bring in the Thunder", which is implied to be connected to this story. And likely a future bunch of other Konoha girls. Still, blueballing your wannabe rapist is so stylish!
Damn kushina is one bad ass bitch, she managed to out fuck ay and bee.
I genuinely praise this fic for such originality.
Oh look, Raikage's got this big black cock and even states that he made many women submit to him with it, and he's way bigger than Minato ever is. Yeah, such a common scenario and even more common trope. And look at how several reviewers as practically begging for the superior black cock to have knocked the bitches up or made them submit in other stories.
But here, Kushina shows that she's not some weak slut that will bend over for anyone. Even with Raikage's huge cock, Kushina still outpaced him and even mocked him, actually hitting him where it hurts, the male ego. And despite how she knows that Minato has the smaller dick, guess what? He's WAY better at sex and can make her go crazy in orgasms. Yeah, it's called technique and skill, rather than just win by sheer power.
And even when Bee arrived to double team her, she STILL won over them and kicked their asses in the end.
Yeah, you made Kushina actually badass. Even someone like me, that would write girls to follow similar tropes, can appreciate this nice reversal.
Waytoohorney, good idea. Would be fun to see the Raikage dominate hotties without meaning to. And the ones who told the girls about it where Kushina and Mikoto, who already experienced the Lightning! Please take the idea bro!
Really loved the role reversal in this. Honestly, I’d started to get kind of tired of Kushina because every single story with her seems the same, but this was a breath of fresh air. Great work
That was fun! Like I get the conquer and dominate , but it can become so unspeakably boring at times. So I liked the fun cause Kushina victory! Hardly ever happens.
and like I’ve always been of opinion it’s far better to have the best have Contemporaries rivals and contenders and the like.
In this case everyone sexiness capabilities being equal or respectable in their own ways! And inventive always good in that.
So still ! Interesting and fun and doing something new with a pairing most just go by the numbers at time so thank you! It was hot as well even if it felt short.
but good fun! Nice to see your revitalized stuff. Can really tell you have a new wind of inspiration and stuff. I feel the need for A to have sorta an Ahab thing going on with Kushina that is only completed by their daughter or something
anyway thanks!
Hot one-shot but now I kind of what another story where A keeps on getting screwed, in about every meaning, of the word by the Konoha/Other kunoichi of the Narutoverse.
Basically A has somehow has earned himself a reputation of being a beast in bed/sex god with many conquered and satified women vouching for him. Of course this gives him a very bad public/political image as a sex addict/pervert with the only reason he has any influence is because of his heritage.
A himself hates the reputation he bears and tries to follow strict self-imposed rules and protocol of being a gentleman and celibacy. However no matter what he does he always ends up balls deep in a woman at least weekly.
And now he is the target of Konoha's latest batch of legal aged kunoichi who want their first time to be one they will never forget when they come to stay in Kumo for diplomatic reasons. For the next five months.
*Girls: Naruko. Hinata, Hanabi (Hinata's twin), Sakura, Ino and Tenten.
Note: Please no cucking/no male Naruto.
Definitely your best version of Kushina! Brilliant!
sequel plz ! She returns to konoha to her husband pregnant with the mighty Raikages baby
Confident, arrogant, in control, slutty Kushina is amazingly sexy. So much better than other versions with a similar premise where she's just 'fucked silly'. This is way more titilating. Great job.
Admittedly one of the better written femdom stories. Good job!
Bout time someone wrote Kushina actually “winning” this confrontation!
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