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Reviews for The Lightning Deal

By : c0p13r
  • From ANON - that was one of the hottest stories i've ever read on this site on November 14, 2020

    yum


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  • From Neko-Waifu on December 25, 2018

    Great chapter. By the way, I hope you'll bring back "Hotspring and Gloryhole" and have the next chapter be about Kushina and Tsume.


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  • From ANON - c0p13rF4n on December 12, 2018

    Hi! Super hot story overall! It'd be great to see one where Konan goes to Iwagakure and does the same with Oonoki.^^ That'd be ridiclous and hot as well! Please consider if you may!


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  • From ANON - Bobbeh on November 24, 2018

    Very nice to see you back here. I really like seeing your stories, and the atmosphere that you try to create with them. My favorite of your stories has to be the ones that feature the Raikage and the various women of the Naruto universe. 

    With regards to this story, I really dig the concept! The roughness and the tension between the two was definitely palpable and I am a fan of the way that you ended it as well, really tied it in to the canon of the story in some way. 

    Looking forward to the stories that you write in the future. 

     


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  • From ANON - Bageltiger on November 24, 2018

    Damn ay got played.


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  • From REX3810 on November 21, 2018

    Do you take inspiration from the images of konan x raikage from neeba ??
    Well I'm glad it was great.
    could you make one of erza x taurus ??


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  • From ANON - DogLover on November 21, 2018

    kudos for writing this masterpiece! I absolutely love that you don't shy away from more hardcore elements like anal, choking, gaping and so on. most authors tend to stick to the more conventional and imo vapid sex acts and just repeat them over and over.

    which is why id have a suggestion for another konan chap since you seemed okay with writing bestiality themed stories as well. it'd be hot if she'd up end up getting captured by the leaf during or after the invasion of konoha and would be entrusted by the inuzukas to break her. im pretty sure you'd know where to go from there, basically hana and/or tsume would use her dogs or a whole pack of unknown inuzuka dogs to mate with her and get  double knotted at some point.  


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  • From ANON - neeb on November 21, 2018

    Fantastic job as always! I secretely hoped for a different mission/challenge for Konan this time around, but I still have my hopes up that it'll eventually come. After all she has already dealt with a jinchuuriki, a bunch of S class criminals and now a Kage. So what's left is a Sannin, right? *hint*, *hint* :)

     

     

     

     


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  • From Sisi on November 21, 2018

    It is so nice to see you back. Welcome again ^^

    Great story , i love how you make Raikage personality so good and true.

    I hope one day you think to write something about Raikage x Tsunade too , maybe after a kage meeting :)


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  • From ANON - sasaki kojiro on November 20, 2018

    your konan stories are the absolute best! the only thing im sad about is that it ended. tt

    i couldve been reading it all the day and night! i hope to see her more in the near future~ maybe a sequel chapter for angels order??

    keep up the great work, but needless to say since you always deliver!

     


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  • From ANON - JJ on November 20, 2018

    Well that was pretty hot nice to see Konan being a distraction for Saskue team haha and how emotionless she was during sex what I liked how in character you kept not just those two but every other character you wrote for your stories that's pretty awesome I can't wait till your next one shot.


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  • From Dean777 on November 19, 2018

    You are a God!!! 😭 


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  • From ANON - JustSomePerv on November 19, 2018

    I'm hoping you'll consider writing this request of mine but can you write a story where Naruko (fem Naruto!) and Hinata are dating and both ended being tricked into or are into sleeping with the Raikage and other Kumo men, both unaware they are both suffering the same fate/told they would spare the other?

    Or maybe an AU where again Naruko and Hinata are dating but the latter is picked for an exchange program in Kumo and lives with the Raikage. The two girls video chat to keep in touch but as time goes on Hinata begins acting stranger and stranger and ends their chats earlier and earlier then the previous ones.

    Then one day Hinata reveals that she was now a slave to the Raikage, who started to fuck her from day one and kept on doing it until Hinata became addicted to him. She officially breaks up with Naruko but tells her if she wanted to she was more than welcomed to join her as another one of the Raikage's sluts. (Something along those lines.)

     


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  • From Siklos88 on November 19, 2018

    Great to have you back. Surprised we haven’t seen any Tenten considering she’s what sparked you again. We always need more Konan though!


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