Reviews for Primal LustBy : animehentaiworks |
Please keep on with the stories
Great to see you back! Looking forward to more
Hi, friend, I hope you are good. I just read this story of yours and it's very good. I hope you can upload more soon because I'm dying to read more of these fantastic stories. Good luck and good work. You also know if you can put something of sex Bestiality
Very good chapter Fucking clever fox Then he also seeks acceptance besides sex. I imagine that the change will go in two ways. If this is the case now, I can not wait to see what the chapters will be like as the days go by. Maybe Hinata could seek advice or consolation in Hanabi later on and in turn corrupt her as well, I mean as an idea of a special or continuation. And I feel that although Naruto is "angry", nothing serious happens, enjoy the change of your sex life with a little more flavor, hahaha. I mean, forgive the guy who pierced his arm from side to side with his body and tried to kill him many times. Not counting Obito or Nagato.
Keep it up, waiting for the continuation.
Can’t wait for the next chapter! If she falls next chapter, that means 6 more of degenerate smut. Really excited to see what you have planned, and hope that there’s some bestiality
Very good chapters. It is an interesting story. Longing to see how Hinata falls little by little. Keep it up.
Like the build up, always nice to see some rising action instead of just an immediate climax. Hope Hinata falls even deeper into degeneracy as the days go by
Maybe have Kurama take an animal form one time when he fucks Hinata? Like a Fox or a dog
An interesting start, will wait for more.
P.S. Please, update Revenge next!
Buena pinta,saludos.
Greetings there new authro I have to say that this plan is an ambitious one, but there's a few bumps in the project. Like a blacksmith creating a new weapon for the first, there has to be little imperfections that need to be ironed out. The blemsihes for this first chapter are the spelling and grammtical errors that need to be corrected before uploading the newer chapter, but other than that it sounds like an interesting concept. My recommendation is to proof read your chapter and fix all the problems with it, look carefully for any mistake that was made that is what the editor function is used for. If you don't have enough time to work on this I would also recommend getting someone to do the work for you, anyway this is just my honest observation do with as you will.
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