Reviews for Naruto the CluckBy : JayDee |
I think it would be better if the tranformation was irreversible.
Well, I always leave Naruto until last, then when I saw your name come up it was like Christmas had come early. I love the alliteration, but: “Now my dear husband is a big black cock...” started me off giggling. “Clucking husband” got a proper belly laugh from me.
Excellent use of the prompts; now I see 'anal' inserted in there, it makes perfect sense. You're so wicked, but wonderful, and I think you made my sunday morning. Brilliant!
I'm sickened, but curious.
::applauds::
This is probably the first and only time I will leave a review in this subdomain, and it is most definitely the only time I will ever enjoy a cuckolding story in this subdomain. I won't even begin to tell you how much fun it was to see you tackle all three prompt words and use them with such nonchalant ease. It took me right back the the second quarter of 2011, and the Thirteen Words from Hell.
But seriously, the alliteration! The hyperbole! The sheer brilliance of Naruto's dialogue! You are a master of the flash fic, and I bow before you in humble awe. Well done!
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