Reviews for Ino's Lovely LifeBy : Scoops |
wouldn't mind ino getting gangbanged.
ino giving more blowjobs
doggy style
riding
some BDSM
hair pulling
spitting
facial
creampie
hair fucking
handjobs
praise kink
lactation
some ino x other women
ino getting rimmed
ino tittyfucking
ino x shotacon boys
ino could drag other women into it, such as
mei
tsunade
kushina
hinata
mikoto
anko
kurenai
hana
hanabi
yugao
guren
yugito
samui
tenten
temari
shizune
hotaru
ryuzetsu
tayuya
kin
karin
kaguya
kurotsuchi
fu
shion
koyuki
mito
konan
possibly beastiality
maybe these other women could do things like gangbangs, being rimmed, spit roasted, anal, vaginal, boobjobs, footjobs, fuck shotacon boys, lesbians, beastiality
I have to say, there is tons of awesome stuff here. I absolutely loved Ino's part with her choking on dick and slapped around and loving it, especially when licked the juices off the floor on the day after, which was incredibly sexy. Compared to that, the Sakura didn't do very much for me, she seems mindlessly violent (which is very much in character, I guess)
What I'd like to see? Chapter 3 would be nice. Aside from that, my favorite part about femslash BDSM would probably be facesitting (the one where the girl on bottom doesn't really get to breathe) which would fit Ino's kinks.
In the end, what I find far more interesting about the Sakura-Ino dynamic then the pairing itself, is the potential for a threeway relationship where they both belong to a master and their rivalry evolves into a sexual competition, like who can take more punishment or predicament bondage in which they make each other's situation more painful, but that doesn't fit this story and isn't really relevant anyway.
In any case, I'm not sure if this story is dead or not, it would be awesome if you continue it some time.
very good, please continue
I like the premise of the story; the unrequited love angle is a nice bit of plot.
Nicely written smut, although it is a bit of a stretch for man #2 to go from being too shy to start to demanding a cleaning at the end. That he does that is a nice touch, but maybe after the start he’s just wanting to make sure he gets her ass first? It’s a minor point though.
I really appreciate your style and hope you write more.
I like the premise of the story; the unrequited love angle is a nice bit of plot.
Nicely written smut, although it is a bit of a stretch for man #2 to go from being too shy to start to demanding a cleaning at the end. That he does that is a nice touch, but maybe after the start he’s just wanting to make sure he gets her ass first? It’s a minor point though.
I really appreciate your style and hope you write more.
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