That’s pretty good so far. I‘m interested in what you will make out of this story

Interesting story look forward to more

Stop making Naruto harem fanfics. There are already shit load of them out there. Naruto sucks and so do his fanfics. No one wants to read dumb Naruto harem fics.

And all those haters that shit on you and your fics say that you hate Naruto or that you are some "Sasugay cocksucker" yadda yadda. 

Well look at this now. A Naruto harem fic. A bit tamer than the Sasuke ones, but definitely still hot with a dick meant to dominate. Looking forward to more. I like the idea that Naruto can go around getting a harem while visiting other places. 

Will this go a similar path to Lone Traveler? I am interested in it. 

Great story, waiting for more, I would like the addiction of Tsunade, Kushina, Mikoto and Fem Kyuubi, especially Fem Kyuubi with your writing style.
Keep up the good work.

something something finally a non sasugay fanfic.

No, fuck that i love your writing and it is nice to see you writing something new. I am looking forward to see what you will do with this story. If i can recommend anyone i would say i would like to see mei or maybe ino.

Great start! I wonder if you’ll do the same thing you did with Lone Wanderer, and have femSasuke be more than just a fuck and have them actually love each other. I get that this is smut lol, but sometimes a little bit of sweetness added in is nice, like that Naruto x Tsunade one shot you did a while back

i loved this chapter and I'm eagerly awaiting more

theres no denying that you're one of the best lemon writers out there but seeing as how i hate sasuke lemons I rarely get to enjoy your work, so its a good day when you post a naruto centric story 

Maybe 

Mirajane Strauss

Grayfia Lucifuge

Mikoto Uchiha

Erza Scarlet

Merudy

Ultear Milkovich

Love this story, can't wait for more. Temari is one of my favorite girls in the series. Hey can you do a chapter with Naruto and Kurenai? I think the scenario would be naruto babysitting her kids while she has a girls night out. She get back home drunk and has sex with Naruto .

Strange, its really detail or more of explaining and less on the sex, itsa good chapter but i dunno..

Good work like usual. 👍👍

Fantastic chapter.

Regardless of character preferences, you are undoubtedly one of the best smut writers on this website. Which is why I am constantly beyond thrilled when you updated a new Naruto-centered story or post a new one.

I really do appreciate that you didn't make Naruto some broken Sex God who can last 5 hours having sex.  Him just having a stupid amount of experience and the ability to recover fast (which links well with his healing) is more enjoyable. Having the girls stay true to themselves and keep their personality really makes each scene feel unique.

I am looming forward to the pairings you will bring up. Starting with Temari is definitely refreshing because I don't think you have paired up Naruto with anyone outside of the usual Konoha girl (Hinata, Sakura, Ino, Tsunade...) so I am looking forward to more additions from less common Konoha girls (Ayame, Yugao, Hanabi, Kurenai...) or some from the other villages/countries (Mei, Mebui, Kurotsuchi, Tsunami...)

The mention of gendsrbending is also interesting cause that is (I think) a new one for your Naruto stories. The obvious femSasuke needs to be thrown out there. But you could also have the other male members of the Konoha 11, their senseis, Konohamaru, A (as some form of revenge for the attempted kidnapping of Hinata.) Lots of different scenarios to play with

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Hope you give this story some love,

LordSinnoh.

Freaken awesome 

cant wait for more 

please continue 

This was hot but they shoulda gone a third round with naruto putting it all in and going wild on her.