I really like how you put emphasis into Temari's point of view. It gives the whole thing a deeper and more intimate feeling knowing how she is breaking down step by step and her thoughts through each point.

Good shit. To be honest, Naruto seems to flicker between being in character and not. From your other works that don't involve him being a massive cuck (because those are trash and you should be ashamed of them) that you've written, you seem to know how to write him normally. So I'm not sure if it's just that the scenes seem a bit unnatural to see an in character Naruto in, or if you're deliberately changing him in those scenes.

Either way, they're a bit off-putting.

I enjoyed Gaara knowing and not caring about Naruto sleeping with Temari, and the ending with Temari starting to become mind-broken was... a thing. I can't say I'm a huge fan of mindbreak, so I hope that not everyone he sleep with becomes nothing more than a cum-thirsty slut with no independence. Being that it's you writing this... I'm honestly not sure whether that's likely or not.

Freakin awesome 

cant wait for more 

yes naruto and temari i wonder if they will be more ladies joining the action

he broke temari

I really enjoyed how you had the characters act and interact this chapter. It was a great read and the ending was a unique surprise 

I’ve been binge reading your stories for the past week now. At first I was a bit skeptical because I saw that they were mainly Sasuke stories, but I soon grew to enjoy the stories. When Addict came out and I saw it was a Naruto story that was a change. It wasn’t a bad change either. I have really enjoyed these past two chapters and can’t wait for the next to come out. Thank you for making this story and for taking the time to read this review.

I really like this story and i cant wait to see who else u bring in 

Good chapter! I especially enjoyed Naruto’s interaction with Gaara. That was funny.

The writing itself is generally good, but it lacks your usual polish on the editing side (example you compare Temari’s robe color to ears and I think you meant eyes). There are also a few awkward spots where the flow is weak. Again, seems more like an editing issue.

overall, it’s really a compelling read and I loved it! Can’t wait to see what happens next. 

What a chapter look forward to more

First 2 chapters have been awesome.  They are very well written. I can't wait for the next chapter!!  Keep up the great work.

Damn, I just loved those two first chapter! Didn't expected emari to be the first girl tho :3

Awesome how he finally broke her in he end and hope we'll see it happen with several other girls :3

Another great chapter 👍

Fantastic chapter.

Once again I am really glad to see Temari get some love. And seeing her slowly get "broken" is actually really fun. I just hope she doesn't end up going into "mindless sex slave territory" whenever she is with Naruto. I always find it morr interesting when the girls in fics at least keep some aspect of their personality.

Originally I thought each act were for seperate villages with each chapter being a different girl. But I much prefer this. It allows you to delve deeper into the dynamics between characters. Which is especially nice for the less common characters.

Regarding, your next chapters, have you thought already about the different scenarios you are going to have? I don't exactly remember if you eger handled something like NTR but from Naruto's perspective. I know Sasuke is your favourite so that rules out the most popular victim, but there are several other options, A if you imply he is dating his secretary Mabui or Chojuro if you have him sleep with Mei and that's without mentioning the other Konoha couples.

Regardless, I look forward to the future,

LordSinnoh

This is fucking great. U must write Naruto more instead of sasugay. i dont knoe why write always sasugay hes emo. everyone noes hes small. Have Naruto have threesome with Mikoto n Sarada that will be hot n sexy. Also kushina. Do more Naruto then more people read youre story.  hes the main character also. Noone like sasugay anyway. Do next chapter!! 

Hey man this was a good story. But it will drown in the sea of thousands of other Naruto harem stories with exactly the same plot. Sex addict and bid dicked Nauto that no kunochi or woman alive can have enough of. And after he's went through everyone, he will go back in the past by some miracle and will bang everyone and their mom's. Or go into the future bang his daughter and Sarada and whichever female. That's the short and long of it. Easy plot and simple too. 

 I will be honest with you. The Lone Wanderer and Naruto's Fetish will literally always be your magnum opus. Even one of the previous reviewer for this story mentioned The Lone Wanderer. And that's because Lone Wanderer was amazing. It had a fresh face that was not Naruto and a different feel to it. This is a fact. Most importantly a STORY. 

I like you and you're one of my favourite authors. And I strongly advice you to focus on your other stories instead of making a new story and updating it a few times before making another one focusing on that instead.

Or give yourself a month of break. You deserve it. You're redears will understand. I'm sorry if I'm criticising. I do feel bad but I just wanted point out. Good Luck sir. 

You have a gift. A true writing gift. Not only are you able to write extremely sexy and erotic stories, you are also a very gifted story teller. You manage to avoid all the usual pitfalls that accompany these kind of stories. And say this as a reader of allot of your work. You manage to have found an excellent way to pace your stories. There is a logical and calm progression to the events. It doesn't turn into a smorgashboard of orgasms and liters and liters of cum from the get go. Or a degrading cuckholding unatural fantasy from the first paragraph onwards. No. it's all very evenly paced. It's all very refreshing. And the themes you write about are also very original in their excecution. Your story "lust, love and friendship" is very good example fo that. Most similar stories would find ways to start the degrading and unnatural deameaning actions from the get go. But your story starts with the first simple act of voyeurism/wanting to see your wife get fucked by an other man. It is only in later chapters that the more darker tones and conclusions (wife stealing/turning Naruto into a cum slut himself, etc.) are reached. And that is very unusual for this site.

Another good example of your writing skills is the story "Fuck brothers". Most Naruto fanfictions can be put into two catergories. Naruto is a literal god's gift to women and Sasuke is a patethic weasel not fit enough to be walked upon. Or Sasuke is the true sex god of the universe and Naruto couldn't even get a fish wet. But you managed to write something exciting that encapsulates both of their personalities. While also making them equal in prowess and gifts. Do you know how unusual that is? I can't say that I have ever read something like that! I would love to read more of your work that deals with the characters in a similar evenly paced and original fashion.

Nevertheless you are one of the greats in writing adultfanfiction.